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Dominic Cole’s IELTS Blog http://ilsielts.blogspot.com Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many people children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from school curriculum? In recent times there has much debate about which subjects should be included on the school curriculum. One particular issue is whether the introduction of more modern subjects such as IT for more traditional subjects such as art and music disadvantages the pupils. This essay examines both sides of this issue. There is one major argument in favour of replacing art, music and sport on the curriculum with subjects like IT. This is that the purpose of school is to prepare children for their working life after school, so the subjects on the curriculum should be relevant to their potential careers. From this point of view, IT is much relevant to schoolchildren as they need to be computer literate if they want to survive in the workplace. For example, it is easy to see that word processing and programming skills will impress employers more than the ability to run fast or draw well. There are also, however, strong arguments for retaining the more traditional subjects as part of the curriculum. One significant counterargument is that the purpose of education is not just to prepare children for later careers, but also to develop their all round “culture”. It is important that children leave school with some knowledge of art, music and sport as all these are all help develop aspects of young people’s personalities. My own personal point of view is that there is merit in both sides of the debate and that all children should study some IT, art music and sport at least at primary school. At secondary school, however, children should be offered a choice between these subjects so that they can continue to study them if they wish. • Intonation transfer from L1 may cause them to be perceived as rude/ inconsiderate, more serious transfer may affect comprehensiveness. Dominic Cole’s IELTS Blog http://ilsielts.blogspot.com • No inflections in L1 - tenses difficult to learn in L2 as L1 has no true tenses and concept of time is expressed by adverbs/implicit or contextual assumptions. Difficulty distinguishing [r] & - Does anyone know why this is as I can't find a reason?!! Prepositions such as 'on', 'in' & 'at' have one chinese translation in many contexts, 'zai' - may be confused resulting in phrases such as 'on Taiwan' instead of 'in Taiwan'. Use of awkward gerunds e.g. 'no noising', excessive use of verbs ending in 'ing' e.g. 'do not climbing', confusion of 'ed' & 'ing' verbs e.g. 'i am bored' vs 'i am boring' --- all of these errors occur because verbs are not conjugated in chinese, for tense or pronoun. No equivalent word for 'the' so may be used excessively when not needed e.g. 'The China' or missed out when needed.  May also be confused with 'a'/'an'. Confusion over countable and uncountable nouns, use of 'how much?' vs 'how many?' - leads to phrases such as 'I want a soup' & 'a lot of shoe'.  This is due to there not being plurals in chinese - no inflections. Switching between 'he' & 'she' - Does anyone know why this is? • • • • • • Gender confusion In Chinese, there aren't separate gender pronouns (e.g., he and she, his and her). Thus, when Chinese speakers learn English, they often forget to use the appropriate gender pronouns. They mostly default to the masculine versions, which can lead to awkwardness when they refer to women using he or his. Singular/plural noun confusion In Chinese, there aren't separate singular and plural forms for nouns; the context is used to distinguish between singular and plural. For instance, if someone said "one cat" in Chinese, cat is singular, but if someone said "many cat", cat is plural. There is no separate plural form cats in Chinese. That's why when Chinese people speak or write English, they tend to forget to make nouns plural, resulting in awkward-sounding phrases like "we have three dog". Dominic Cole’s IELTS Blog http://ilsielts.blogspot.com Subject-verb agreement confusion In Chinese, there is no such thing as verb conjugation to match with the corresponding subject. In English, we say "I like cheese", "he likes cheese", and "they like cheese". In Chinese, there aren't separate forms for like and likes, so one would simply say "he like cheese", which sounds funny when translated into English. Verb tense confusion In Chinese, there is no such thing as verb conjugation to denote tenses; the context is used to distinguish between past, present, future, and all the other various tenses. For example, there is a single word in Chinese that means run. If you want to use the present tense, you simply say "I run". If you want the past tense, you have to say something like "yesterday I run", where yesterday provides the requisite context. And if you want the future tense, you have to say something like "tomorrow I run". Verb conjugation is one of the most difficult parts of the English language for native Chinese speakers to master, simply because there are so many tenses, and each can only be properly used in select situations. Chinese speakers know not to always use the (default) present tense of English verbs, but oftentimes their attempts at switching up the tenses lead to incorrect and funny-sounding sentences. Omitting or inserting articles In Chinese, there is no need for articles (a, an, the) in front of nouns, so Chinese speakers often forget to place the appropriate article when speaking or writing English. For instance, they might say "I went to store" or "He likes movie". Sometimes articles should not be inserted, but Chinese speakers insert them anyways, perhaps because they remember that they should be aware of using articles when speaking or writing English. Thus, we get Dominic Cole’s IELTS Blog http://ilsielts.blogspot.com bloopers like "the God blessed America" or "you gained the weight last month". Confusing prepositions The correct use of prepositions (e.g., in, at, on, to, into) is often difficult for non-native English speakers to master. This part-of-speech is especially problematic for Chinese speakers because there isn't such a strong distinction between different prepositions in the Chinese language. To English speakers, "he got a job in Microsoft" sounds a bit off, but "he got a job at Microsoft" seems more natural-sounding. However, in Chinese, there is one word (technically, character) that sometimes means in and other times means at, depending on the context. Mixing up first and last names In Chinese, people's last (family) names are spoken and written before their first names, the exact reverse of English conventions. Thus, when Chinese speakers mention English names, they sometimes say them backwards (e.g., "Smith Will"). Examples of combining multiple mistakes Here are some sentences that combine multiple mistakes of the types that I've described in this article. "Yesterday I go to market to buy three duck." "Mary like to eat meat; he definitely not vegetarian." "He like to go to mall to shop for the clothing." "Last week he get good job at big city." Notice that the meanings of these sentences are still fairly clear despite the incorrect grammar, which makes them sound strange to native English speakers. The context is enough to disambiguate meaning.

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