Morgan 1 Student Examples Mrs. Morgan World History 15 October 2010 Paraphrase/ In-text Citation Student Examples The word, and the outrage, spread quickly. A week later, Imus was gone, banished from his multimillion-dollar television and radio show even before he had the chance to complete the all-too- familiar cycle of public penance that high-profile sinners are usually granted. Original When the news hit about Imus comments all hell broke loose. Within seven days Imus was force to give up his multimillion-dollar media gigs before he had a chance to do the familiar media dance of apologies (Kosova 27). Paraphrase Version When the phone rang at 7 o’clock on Sunday morning, I knew the call was too early to be anything but terrible news. “Adam is dead.” My brother-in-law’s voice was shaking. “He bought a gun. He shot himself.” Original Morgan 2 I was awoken by tragic news about the death of my nephew committing suicide with a gun (Dalmas 18). Paraphrase Version 1 One Tragic Sunday morning I got a phone call from my brother-in-law with word of my nephew Adam’s suicide by a firearm (Dalmas 18). Paraphrase Version 2 Direct Quotes and In-text Citations “Nothing I saw that day gave a hint of Adam’s emotional fragility” (Dalmas 18). Paul C. Dalmas was clueless to his nephew’s suicidal tendencies. He stated, “Nothing I saw that day gave a hint of Adam’s emotional fragility” (18). Paraphrase of Original Text 1) “Her younger sister has also served in the military police” (Anderson 5). Morgan 3 Sgt. Mosely’s sibling followed in the footsteps of her career in law enforcement (Anderson 5). 2) “In her college classes now, Sgt Mosely has done what the other nursing students only read about in textbooks” (Anderson 5). With a lot of hands on experience, Sgt Mosely is farther ahead than other nurses in training (Anderson 5). 3) “Whether or not you’re planning to go to college, you can find a career through the Army Guard” (Anderson 5). The Army Guard offers post secondary opportunities for many young people (Anderson 5). Morgan 4 1.) “There seem to be two kinds of people in the world: those who have an iPad and those who want one” (Karpen 6). Everyone loves the iPad, it’s a worldwide phenomenon (Karpen 6). 2.) “Somehow Apple always seems to get it right” (Karpen 6). Apple produces a superior product (Karpen 6). Apple dominates the competition (Karpen 6). 3.) “Could one go even farther and say that not only will the iPad and similar portable devices replace mobile laptop Morgan 5 computers but also desktop computers” (Karpen 6). Can hand held electronics like the iPad excel more and outdate common house hold computers (Karpen 6)? 1) “The first step in preventing such a serious catastrophe in the future is to determine what happened” (Karpen 11). To stop a major disaster from happening, you must find the cause (Karpen 11). 2) President Obama has taken steps to end the cozy relationship Morgan 6 between oil companies and the agencies that regulate them, since some have claimed that the BP tragedy was partly the result of lax government enforcement” (Karpen 11). The close connection between oil companies and their government watch dogs has been noticed by the Obama administration. Since then the president has vowed to put a stop to corrupt business relationships (Karpen 11). 3) “In short, it’s bad” (Karpen 11). Morgan 7 In brief, the situation is dire. (Karpen 11).
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