Elevator Pitch Example

							Elevator Pitch
What is an Elevator Pitch?
An elevator pitch is a short 1 to 3 sentence statement which communicates “Why you are someone worth hiring, helping or working with”.
Why is this a “STRONG” example?

STRONG
Elevator Pitch

I have three years of market research experience with specific expertise in research design, construction of analytical models, and data analysis. While at my current company I developed a new online research methodology using Twitter and Facebook that was adopted by the entire division and saves the company an estimated $1 million annually. I graduated in 2005 from Southeastern University as a joint marketing and econometrics major.

• Demonstrates job relevance, leadership, problem solving, pedigree and impact. These are 5 of the 7 Elements of a Good Story • Provides useful detail about specific skills that may be applicable to a targeted opportunity • Educational detail provides additional relevant detail related to core skill set required for the opportunity

Why is this a “WEAK” example?

WEAK
Elevator Pitch

I have spent the last three years in market research. My objective is to move to a larger platform where I can get more involved in marketing strategy. I graduated in 2005 from Southeastern University.

• Does not demonstrate any of the 7 Elements of a Good Story • Does not highlight any relevant skills

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