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					English                                                                               Andie Garcia
Period 7                                                                                      date
                                               Title


Prewriting phase

Summer , water , time , school. .family. play , fun ,baseball , soccer , tree , ice-cream, flowerer

There is good times, go and have fun , go with friends .be with family , cook with them

Drafting

The good things about summer vacation is that you have time out of school were you relax

with friends and family because you don’t have that much time with because you spend most of

your day in school learning new things and I am a person that likes to learning new things in

school but every person needs some a time off from there usual routine .there are many things

you can do over the summer go to the beach or go to the park . what i want to this summer is

that I will like to go to the park and play tennis all I will like to learned how to play the piano

I know how to play simple music in it but I will like to get better to move my fingers faster

playing better music there are many kinds of music ,.a nowhere thing I will like to do is go to

Chicago and hang out

Revising phase

The good things about summer vacation is that you have time out of school and you can relax

with friends and family because you don’t have that much time with them because you spend

all your day in school learning new things and I am a person that likes to learning new things

there new things one can learned every day and there is sent any thing that stops you from

getting new knowledge the only one is your self .      In school but every person needs some a time

off from there usual routine .there are many things you can do over the summer go to the beach

or go to the park . what I want to this summer is that I will like to go to the park and play

tennis all I will like to learned how to play the piano I know how to play simple music in it but



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English                                                                              Andie Garcia
Period 7                                                                                     date
                                               Title
I will like to get better to move my fingers faster playing better music there are many kinds of

music . will like to go Chicago to go see the science museum

Editing

The good things about summer vacation is that you have time out of school and you can relax

with friends and family because you don’t have that much time with them because you spend

all your day in school learning new things and I am a person that likes to learning new things

there new things one can learned every day and there is sent any thing that stops you from

getting new knowledge the only one is your self .    In school but every person needs some a time

off from there usual routine .there are many things you can do over the summer go to the beach

or go to the park . what I want to this summer is that I will like to go to the park and play

tennis all I will like to learned how to play the piano I know how to play simple music in it but

I will like to get better to move my fingers faster playing better music there are many kinds of

music . Will like to go Chicago to go see the science museum there I can learned new kind of

thing and I all so heard that they redid it making more exciting to see it what they have done

to it




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