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					English                                                                       Jennifer Guillen
Per.6                                                                                  6-3-10
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    *Stress free                              *no studying
    *No homework                                *hanging out
    *staying up late                            *relaxing
    *freedom                                    *fun



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i like summer vacation because i can hang out with all my friends and familys all night

without worrys that I have to go to school the next day or that i need to go home and do

my homework. Now I can feel stress free without studying for quiz or doing all my

homework every night with a little break for me to relax, but now i have fun all day

everyday. Also now I can do anything outside because it’s hot now and I can play tennis,

football, volleyball, and go swimming. And now there going to be a lot of family party

that I can go to dance and hang out without thinking that I need to sleep early, so I don’t

get use to it on school days then get too tried to listen to the teacher. Even if there is only

2 mouth of summer vacation, that also mean that it’s 2 mouth of freedom without school

to make me stress out so much.



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i like summer vacation because i can hang out with all my friends and familys all night

long without worrys that I would have to go to school the next day, or that I would need

to go home and do my homework. Now I can feel stress free without studying for quiz, or

having to do all my homework every night with a little break for me to relax, but now i

can have fun all day everyday. Also now I can do anything outside like play tennis,

football, volleyball, and go swimming. And now there going to be a lot of family party

that I can go to dance and hang out without thinking that I can’t sleep late, so I don’t get
English                                                                       Jennifer Guillen
Per.6                                                                                  6-3-10
use to it on school days then get too tried to listen to the teacher. Even if there is only 2

mouth of summer vacation, that also mean that it’s 2 mouth of freedom without school to

make me stress out so much.



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I like summer vacation because I can hang out with all my friends and families all night

long without worrys that I would have to go to school the next day, or that I would need

to go home and do my homework. Now I can feel stress free without studying for

quizzes, or having to do all my homework every night without a little break for me to

relax, but now I can have fun all day everyday. Also now I can do anything outside like

play tennis, football, volleyball, and go swimming. And now there going to be a lot of

family party that I can go to dance and hang out without thinking that I can’t sleep late,

so I don’t get use to it on school days then get too tried to listen to the teacher. Even if

there is only two mouth of summer vacation, that also mean that it’s two mouth of

freedom without school to make me stress out so much.



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I like summer vacation because I can hang out with all my friends and families all night

long without worrys that I would have to go to school the next day, or that I would need

to go home and do my homework. Now I can feel stress free without studying for

quizzes, or having to do all my homework every night without a little break for me to

relax, but now I can have fun all day everyday. Also now I can do anything outside like

play tennis, football, volleyball, and go swimming. And now there going to be a lot of

family party that I can go to dance and hang out without thinking that I can’t sleep late,
English                                                                       Jennifer Guillen
Per.6                                                                                  6-3-10
so I don’t get use to it on school days then get too tried to listen to the teacher. Even if

there is only two mouth of summer vacation, that also mean that it’s two mouth of

freedom without school to make me stress out so much.

				
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