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          Scene DateScene Time
Scene Number                              of the Location Characters Notes
                                Scene Day SceneWeek    Scene       Scene
       23 11/21/09 10 p.m.                                         Tory talks to Elise and hears about the kids. She's sobbing
                                Saturday Rockledge Tory Rockledge Madison
       24 11/21/09 10 p.m.                             Elise Davis Carpentier
                                Saturday Elise and Jeb's house After hanging up from the call with Tory, Elise goes into th
       25 11/21/09 11 p.m.                             Helen Carpentier calls Elise
                                                                   Helen
                                Saturday Helen and George Carpentier's house to see if she and George can come over
                                                        Elise Carpenteri is puzzled by Helen's phone call and request, becau
                                                                   Elise
       26 11/21/09 11:15 p.m. Saturday Jeb and Elise Carpenteri's house
                                                       George Carpentier
                                                                   George
       27 11/21/09 11:15 p.m. Saturday The senior Carpentier's house heard an answering machine message from their
                                                       Elise Carpentier fills in
                                                                   Elise
       28 11/21/09 11:45 p.m. Saturday Jeb and Elise Carpentier's house her parents and Jeb's parents with the details
                                                       Caitlin Carpentier is in a
                                                                   Caitlin
       29 11/21/09 Midnight Saturday Motel on the outskirts of Rivermont seedy motel room with her Aunt Sarah and h
       30 11/21/09 Midnight Saturday Motel                         Paul
                                                       Paul Carpentier and Bick are parked in Bick's Camaro outside the mo
       31 11/21/09 Midnight Saturday Motel                         Ben
                                                       Ben Madison arrives at the motel where all the cops are congregate
                                                       Elise       Elise and
       32 11/21/09 Midnight Saturday Jeb and Elise Carpentier's houseJeb talked about Ben coming and not telling Tor
       33 11/22/09 After Midnight
                                Sunday                             Tory is in the
                                          Jeb and Elise Carpentier's hosue. kitchen, glad that Elise is insisting that she s
                                                       Tory Rockledge Madison
                     7:30 a.m. Monday
       34 November 23,2009                              and the FBI's office
                                          Ben's officeBe MadsonJeb and Elise come to Ben's office at 7:30 and then Ben d
                     8 a.m.
       35 November 23,2009      Monday                  Agent Tracis Prescott's office
                                                                   Ben,
                                          FBI SpecialCara Carpentier Cara and Jeb are in Prescott's office. Prescott says h
                     11:39 a.m. Monday
       36 November 23,2009                             Tory Rocklegde Madison go Deli to the deli and talk building
                                                                   Tory and Elise
                                          Tory and Elise's office and the Downtowndownin the lobby of their before Ben get
                     4 p.m.
       37 November 23,2009      Monday                 Ben Madison Ben
                                          Travis Prescott's FBI office comes to Travis Prescott's office. Tom Carmody, one
        1 11/20/09 5 p.m.       Friday                 E
                                          Elise's office lise      Elise is waiting for her best friend Cara to visit her at her c
        2 11/20/09 5:30 p.m. Friday       Cara's car Cara          Cara is going to visit her friend Elise about a mysterious lis
        3 11/20/09 5:30 p.m. Friday       Elise's officeElise      Elise keeps waiting for her friend and leaves voice mail m
        4 11/20/09 5:45 p.m. Friday       Cara's car Cara          Cara thinks about how she went to the bank and was give
        5 11/20/09 6 p.m.       Friday    Cara's car Cara          Cara calls Elise to let her know she's taking her up on her
        6 11/20/09 6 p.m.       Friday    Rockledge Tory           Tory is staying at one of the chalets at Rockledge, the trou
        7 11/20/09 6:30 p.m. Friday       Rockledge Jack           Jack and Tory have dinner together in the Rockledge dinin
        8 11/20/09 8 p.m.       Friday                 Cara        Cara shows
                                          Jeb and Elise Carpentier's home Elise the list and tells her where she got it, wh
        9 25 years ago                     years ago Jack
                                Summer 25Jack's accident           Jack Rockledge is an 18-year-old who's on top of the worl
       10 11/20/09 10 p.m.      Friday                 Jeb         Jeb is in his "Dad" den / study / den. Elise comes in and
                                          Jeb and Elise Carpentier's house, in Jeb'srecliner in the library
       11 11/21/09 9 a.m.                                          Jeb
                                Saturday Edelweiss Jeb Carpentier goes for a run around Edelweiss. As he runs past Elis
                                                       Elise       Elise thnks Edelweiss
       12 11/21/09 9:30 a.m. Saturday Jeb and Elise Carpentier's home inabout Sarah and about the time they had to sh
                                                       Jeb         Jeb goes
       13 11/21/09 9:30 a.m. Saturday First National Bank of Rivermont to the bank and finds paperwork that confirms w
       14 11/21/09 Noon                                Ben Madison and
                                                                   Ben
                                Saturday Ben and Tory Madison's house their dog Spike had gone for a bike ride along the
       15 11/21/09 4 p.m.                                          Tory is ready
                                Saturday Rockledge Tory Rockledge Madison to go back to Ben. She realizes what's she d
       16 11/21/09 4 p.m.                              Caitlin Carpentier beginning Edelweiss for the wlalk that Paul and Ca
                                                                   At the
                                Saturday Caitlin Carpentier's bedroom and earlierof the scene, Caitlin Carpenter is sitting a
       17 11/21/09 8 p.m.                               and        Paul the Carpentier home.
                                Saturday Paul's roomPaul the kitch at keeps trying to call Caitlin but his calls go to voice ma
       18 11/21/09 8 p.m.                              Elise
                                Saturday Carpentier home           Elsie goes downstairs to the kitchen and finds Paul's note
                                                       Katherine Davis
                                                                   Katherine
       19 11/21/09 8:30 p.m. Saturday Driving to downtown Rivermont tells Parker about Paul and Caitlin and says the
                                                       Cara
       20 11/21/09 8:30 p.m. Saturday Cara's car and home Cara drives home from Jeb and Elsie's after their meeting
       21 11/21/09 9 p.m.                              Helen Carpentier
                                                                   The elder
                                Saturday Rivermont Police Headquarters Carpentiers join the Davises at the police station
       22 11/21/09 9 p.m.                              Ben Madison Madison arrives. They start to ride the elevator up to
                                                                   Ben
                                Saturday Rivermont Police Headquarters




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 d hears about the kids. She's sobbing about her life and waits to go to stay with Elise until she stops crying. She has to chase Paws Tucker t
m the call with Tory, Elise goes into the kitchen to make a pot of coffee. She finds her father there rummaging through the refrigerator for som
 ee if she and George can come over there. George calls Tom Callahan, his securty guard .chauffeur to have him warm up the car. Helen has
elen's phone call and request, because it was out of character for her mother-in-law. Tory arrives and Elise has her put her things in a small g
 wering machine message from their family physician about an MRI for Helen on Monday morning and he questions her about it.
  ts and Jeb's parents with the details of Jeb's call.
motel room with her Aunt Sarah and her two friends. She hears a newscast about her disappearnce.
  ked in Bick's Camaro outside the motel where Caitlin is. They come up with the idea to bang on doors and yell that there was a bomb and pe
  tel where all the cops are congregated. He learns that two young men took Caitin. He calls Jeb and while they're talking, Paul and Bick bring
 about Ben coming and not telling Tory.
   glad that Elise is insisting that she spend the night because she doesn’t know where else she would go. Ben comes to the back door and To
 o Ben's office at 7:30 and then Ben drives them over to the FBI office.
  e in Prescott's office. Prescott says he'll open an investigation. Ben asks if he can be a special liasion and Travis says yes. They leave the F
wn to the deli and talk before Ben gets there. Whe Ben arrives, he fills them in on what's happening with the case. They eat and talk and Ben
 Prescott's office. Tom Carmody, one of Travis's agents, brings in the arrest warrant for Rob Barstow. The agents go to the bank and arrest B
 r best friend Cara to visit her at her counselor office.
 her friend Elise about a mysterious list discovered in her dead husband's files.
or her friend and leaves voice mail messages but they can't seem to connect. She's been getting phantom calls where someone hangs up an
 w she went to the bank and was given Kevin's files. She discovers his note about there being a problem with the Outreach account but she d
  her know she's taking her up on her offer to drop by the house that evening because they weren't able to connect at Elise's office. Cara stop
   of the chalets at Rockledge, the trout fishing resort her family owns. She's left her husdand, Ben Madison, a detective on the Rivermont poli
  inner together in the Rockledge dining room. Jack is paralyzed from a teenage accident and and is confined to a wheelchair. Tory tells Jack
   list and tells her where she got it, what she'd done so far about it and what she thought it meant. Elise goes to get Jeb.
   18-year-old who's on top of the world. He's a freshman at Washington University in St. Louis and is madly in love with his high school sweet
cliner in the den. Elise comes in and sits with him. He had told Cara he would go to the bank the next day, Saturday morning, and see what h
 ound Edelweiss. As he runs past Elise's parents condo, he thinks about her longlost sister, Sarah and how he'd heard the story about a girl n
 ah and about the time they had to share a bedroom, when Grandma Kit came to live with them.
  and finds paperwork that confirms what Cara found. This is the scene that talks about Rob Barstow being gay, which I need to remove. Rob
 ike had gone for a bike ride along the Mississippi bluffs. He'd forgotten his cell phone on the kitchen counter. There was a long involved mes
ack to Ben. She realizes what's she done and what's she's thorwing away. She had stopped taking the hormone shots and was in much bette
 e scene, Caitlin Carpenter is sitting at her desk in her bedroom working on the laptop. She thinks back to earlier in the day when she went fo
  all Caitlin but his calls go to voice mail He's starving and there's no sign of dinner so he makes himself a ham and cheese sandwich and trie
s to the kitchen and finds Paul's note on the fridge. Jeb, Ben and Cara come downstairs and Jeb and Elise walk them out to their cars. Jeb a
    about Paul and Caitlin and says they have to go downtown. As they're driving, Katherine calls Helen Carpentier, Jeb's mother and finds out
 m Jeb and Elsie's after their meeting with Ben. She doesn't want to go into the house, just sits in he garage in her Mustang. She decides to g
s join the Davises at the police station.
   They start to ride the elevator up to Ben's office when Jeb and Elise arrive. They all go upstairs together. Ben takes them to a conference ro




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 ng. She has to chase Paws Tucker to find him for the trip to Rivermont. She drives back to Rivermont listening to jazz.
aging through the refrigerator for something to eat. She makes ham and cheese sandwiches.
have him warm up the car. Helen has one of her dizzy spells and thinks about her visit to the doctor the day before.
 se has her put her things in a small guest room off the kitchen. They have coffee and snacks and talk about their patients. Elise asks what a
 e questions her about it.


nd yell that there was a bomb and people should get out of ther rooms. They plan to grab Caitlin and put her in the car and drive off. The pla
e they're talking, Paul and Bick bring Caitlin home. Ben said he'll be right there and Jeb tells him Tory is there. Ben stops by the police statio

. Ben comes to the back door and Tory has to have him go around the front because she can't get the back door open. They fall into each ot

nd Travis says yes. They leave the FBI office and drive back to police headquarters. Ben calls Tory and leaves a message, telling her a little
 the case. They eat and talk and Ben says he has a meeting late in the afternoon with Travis Prescott. After lunch, back at Tory and Elise's o
he agents go to the bank and arrest Barstow.


m calls where someone hangs up and it's started to worry her. The phantom caller called at random times, breathed a little, then would hang
 with the Outreach account but she doesn't know who the note was intended for. She finds the name of her surrogate grandmother on a list o
o connect at Elise's office. Cara stops by to see 17-year-old son Matthew who has Down syndrome at Bayview on her way to Elise's house.
on, a detective on the Rivermont police force, because they're not getting along. Tory has become obsessed with having a baby and is drivin
 ined to a wheelchair. Tory tells Jack about her marital woes. He's loving and supportive and encourages her to talk to him. Jack asks Tory a
 oes to get Jeb.
dly in love with his high school sweetheart, Cara Lassiter, who was one of his sister Tory's best friends. His fraternity had held a pledge party
y, Saturday morning, and see what he could find out. Jeb thinks about the life-changing thing he's about to do. He hasn't talked to Elise abou
ow he'd heard the story about a girl next door coming over to tell Katherine and Parker Davis that their 18-year-old daughter Sarah had run a

ng gay, which I need to remove. Rob is tall and slender with graying hair, dark blue eyes, a real chick magnet. He claims to be a confirmed b
 nter. There was a long involved message from his good friend Jeb Carpentier. He goes over to the Carpentiers, taking Spike with him. As he
ormone shots and was in much better shape emotionally now without them. She's out on the trail in the dark and is getting scared. Ben calls
 o earlier in the day when she went for a walk with her brother Paul and told him about how their long-lost Aunt Sarah had contacted her. Aun
a ham and cheese sandwich and tries to decide what he should do about Caitlin. Paul calls his friend Bick to drive him downtown to Caitlin's
 se walk them out to their cars. Jeb and Elsie go up to Cailtin's room and discover that she's gone. Elise leaves voice mails for both Caitlin an
arpentier, Jeb's mother and finds out that they're also planning on coming dowtown, despite Jeb's admonition not to.
age in her Mustang. She decides to go kiss Matthew goodnight and while she's there, pick up a brochure about a volunteer organization conn

r. Ben takes them to a conference room and asks Jeb to tell him what's going on. Instead Elise takes the lead. She gives him Paul's note an




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stening to jazz.


bout their patients. Elise asks what about Ben and Tory says she's going to beg him to let her come home. Jeb calls and says there's no new



t her in the car and drive off. The plan works and they rescue Caitlin. As they're speeding out of the motel parking lot, police cars descend on
there. Ben stops by the police station to file a brief report, then heads for the Carpentiers' house to see Tory, hoping he can convince her to

ack door open. They fall into each other's arms and all is right with the world again. Ben updates Jeb and Elise, and tells Katherine and Park

leaves a message, telling her a little about the meeting and asking if she's free for lunch.
fter lunch, back at Tory and Elise's office, Cara comes to visit to get what information she can.



 es, breathed a little, then would hang up. It sort of spooked her but she hadn't taken it seriously. The number always showed up as "Unavail
her surrogate grandmother on a list of mortgage loans and knows that can't be right She searches the Social Security Death index and finds
 ayview on her way to Elise's house.
ssed with having a baby and is driving Ben crazy. He's escaped even more than usual into his job Tory is taking hormone shots and her moo
s her to talk to him. Jack asks Tory about his old love Cara, something he hasn't done before.

His fraternity had held a pledge party at Rockledge and Jack decided to leave the party and go drop in on Cara, who had a summer job at an
 to do. He hasn't talked to Elise about it yet and he does that. He tells her his heart is not in the banking business and he wants to change ca
8-year-old daughter Sarah had run away from home.

agnet. He claims to be a confirmed bachelor but he's quite the ladies man. Jeb discovers later that Rob was once married. Jeb calls Ben and
pentiers, taking Spike with him. As he drives, he thinks about all the trouble he and Tory have been having. The four of them get together and
dark and is getting scared. Ben calls her.
 t Aunt Sarah had contacted her. Aunt sarah asked about everybody, even Kevin and his suicide. She was particularly interested in how much
ck to drive him downtown to Caitlin's rescue.
 leaves voice mails for both Caitlin and Paul. Jeb calls Ben and he tells them to meet him downtown at police headquarters. They search the

e about a volunteer organization connected with Bayview.

e lead. She gives him Paul's note and the e-mails between Caitlin and Sarah that Elise found in Caitlin's wastebasket. She tells Ben thar Sar




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me. Jeb calls and says there's no news yet.



 el parking lot, police cars descend on the motel, lights blazing and sirens blaring.
 Tory, hoping he can convince her to come home.

 d Elise, and tells Katherine and Parker that he'll meet them at the poliice statiion downtown in the morning. Tory and Ben head home and on




 mber always showed up as "Unavailable." She hadn't mentioned the hang-ups to Jeb because he would more than likely overreact. He was
 ocial Security Death index and finds that all the names are of people who are dead.

 s taking hormone shots and her mood swings and emotional ups and downs are putting an incredible strain on the marriage. Tory goes dow


 n Cara, who had a summer job at an animal hospital in Rivermont. She had agreed to take an overnight shift for one of the techs who was o
 business and he wants to change careers. He wants to become a high school history teacher. Elise tells him she's all for it and he should do


was once married. Jeb calls Ben and tells him about the problem and asks if he can come to the Carpentier house that afternoon, then he ca
ng. The four of them get together and talk and come to the conclusion that Rob Barstow was involved in this also. None of them can bear to

as particularly interested in how much money Jeb got from the sale of the bank.Caitlin leaves to go meet her Aunt Sarah at a hotel. She think

 olice headquarters. They search the kids' rooms then Elise calls her mother Katherine Davis to ask if she knew Sarah and Caitlin were e-ma



 wastebasket. She tells Ben thar Sarah is a hopeless cause and not a good influence to have in Paul and Caitlin's lives. Ben puts out BOLOs




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ng. Tory and Ben head home and on the way, he fills her in on the Kevin bank story.




d more than likely overreact. He was protective of his family and would insist on escalating the issue to their friend Ben Madison with the Rive


rain on the marriage. Tory goes down to the lodge for dinner and the waitress Jinny tells her that her brother is there and does she want to jo


  shift for one of the techs who was on vacation. A friend of Jack's, Pat Bennett, insisted on riding along with Jack because he wanted a ride
s him she's all for it and he should do it. They have no money worries so the reduction in salary won't be a problem. They agree, that depend


ntier house that afternoon, then he calls Cara and tells her it's set up with Ben.
 this also. None of them can bear to believe that Kevin Carpentier was involved. They eventually come up with the theory that Kevin wasn't in

 her Aunt Sarah at a hotel. She thinks about how Aunt Sarah worked in Law Vegas as a blackjack dealer and had won a slot machine jackpo

e knew Sarah and Caitlin were e-mailing. Then Jeb and Elise drive downtown.



d Caitlin's lives. Ben puts out BOLOs on the license plates of the kids. George Carpentier offers the services of Amos Powell's security firm.




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heir friend Ben Madison with the Rivermont police.


ther is there and does she want to join him for dinner.


with Jack because he wanted a ride in Jack's red Corvette convertible. Jack let Pat drive and a mishap with a pair of sunglasses led to a fata
a problem. They agree, that depending on what Jeb discovers at the bank the next day, to contact Ben Madison, unofficially of course, to se



up with the theory that Kevin wasn't involved, that he had discovered what Rob Barstow had done years ago, and Rob had silenced him by ki

er and had won a slot machine jackpot that gave her enough money to take a leave of absence from her job and come to Rivermont. Caitlin g




vices of Amos Powell's security firm. Ben says he's going to the hotel to see what he can learn and Jeb asks to go along. Ben agrees but tells




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with a pair of sunglasses led to a fatal accident. Pat is killed and Jack sustained a spinal cord injury that left him paralyzed for life. Neither bo
Madison, unofficially of course, to see what he thinks and to see what he thinks they should do.



ago, and Rob had silenced him by killing Kevin and making his death look like suicide. Rob had been in the midst of the deal of his lifetime, s

 job and come to Rivermont. Caitlin goes to the coffee shop where her aunt said to meet her and she wasn't there. Caitlin goes into the hotel




asks to go along. Ben agrees but tells him he has to stay out of the way. Ben takes Jeb with him to the hotel. Ben questions the desk clerk, w




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left him paralyzed for life. Neither boy had been wearing a seat belt. The doctor theorized that Pat would have survived and Jack wouldn't ha




the midst of the deal of his lifetime, selling out the bank for hundreds of millions of dollars.

asn't there. Caitlin goes into the hotel and finds out that her aunt isn't registered. As Caitlin is leaving, her aunt drives up and pushes her into




otel. Ben questions the desk clerk, who tells him the young woman appeared to have been forced into a car by an older woman. The desk cl




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 have survived and Jack wouldn't have been paralyzed if they'd been wearing their seatbelts. Jack's accident had eventually led to his paren




r aunt drives up and pushes her into the car and drives off with her. Paul tries to call her but Aunt Sarah turns off Caitlin's phone.




 car by an older woman. The desk clerk remembers the license plate and Ben puts out an APB on it. Jeb calls Elise to fill her in. She tells him




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ident had eventually led to his parents' divorce. It was the




turns off Caitlin's phone.




b calls Elise to fill her in. She tells him that Tory called her and is




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