Radio Essay Scoring Guide

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							Radio Essay Supplemental Scoring Guide
In addition to the BSSD 6-Traits Scoring Guide, the following rubric will be used to
determine Proficiency on the Radio Essay:

  Element        Emerging         Developing          Proficient               Advanced


                                                 stays on task, uses
                                                 appropriate
Technology/                                      applications and web
 Computer                                        tools, asks
    Use                                          permission before
                                                 using un-preapproved
                                                 resources, meets tech    all of proficient, plus
                                                 standards listed for     helps/teaches peers
                                                 current level            with technology
                                                 expression for
                                                 dialogue, overall
   Vocal
                                                 reading of story has
Presentation                                     appropriate speed,       all of proficient, plus
/ Recording                                      articulation, and        vocal delivery
                                                 volume                   enhances the essay

Layering &                                       layering helps create
  Editing                                        and/or maintain the
                                                 mood of the story,
Audio Files,
                                                 editing is smooth for    all of proficient,
  Digital                                        transitions, layering    plus:at least 4 layers
 Pictures,                                       does not distract from   of media (i.e. voice,
    etc.                                         writing (writing         sound effects, music,
                                                 stands alone)            picture, video)
   Part of Project that
    Addresses each
        Standard                                                      WR Standards addressed in Radio Essay Project
prewr, drafting, revising,
                                   WR.05.01 6-Trait skills-L5
editing
inspiration, other prewr
                                   WR.05.02 Pre-writing strategies
activities
all of project                     WR.05.03 Follows writing process

upon submission/publication of
                               WR.05.05 Writing samples-L5
a proficient project

self and peer revisions            WR.05.07 Revise writing-L5
developing rubric, reflection at
                                   WR.05.08 Explain judgments of
end of project publication and
                                   quality
share time
prewr, drafting, revising,
                                   WR.06.01 6-Trait skills-L6
editing
publishing to community/world
rather than just the classroom,    WR.06.02 Variety of Audiences-L6
etc.
all of project                     WR.06.03 Uses writing process-L6


upon submission/publication of
                               WR.06.05 Writing samples-L6
a proficient project


self and peer revisions            WR.06.06 Revise writing-L6
prewr, drafting, revising,
                                   WR.07.01 6-Trait skills-L7
editing
all of project                     WR.07.04 Applies writing process
reflection at end of project
                                WR.07.05 Self-reflection
publication and share time
                                WR.07.06 Analyzes strengths and
giving peer revision comments
                                weaknesses
taking notes during tech and
                                WR.07.07 Note taking skills
narrative mini-lessons


upon submission/publication of
                               WR.07.10 Writing samples-L7
a proficient project
    WR Standards addressed in Radio Essay Project
Articulates and exhibits knowledge of the 6-Traits.
Uses a variety of prewriting strategies including generating ideas (brainstorming, note taking, discussing,
interviewing) and organizing information.
Follows writing process (e.g., prewriting, drafting, evaluating, revising, proofreading, publishing or
presenting).
Writes a minimum of five proficient multi-paragraph writing samples in four different formats (both fiction
and non-fiction) such as: narrative/creative, poetry, autobiographical, explanatory, observations or reports.
       (GLE [6]2.1.1, 2.2.1, 2.2.2)
Revise writing to improve organization, word choice, paragraph development, and voice appropriate to the
purpose. (GLE [6]2.4.1)

Forms and explains own standards or judgments of quality writing


Articulates and exhibits knowledge of the 6-Traits.


Writes to a variety of audiences (e.g. author, friend, business, adult, self). (GLE [7&8]3.4.5)

Uses the entire writing process consistently (prewriting, drafting, evaluating, revising, proofreading,
publishing, or presenting).(GLE [7]3.2.4, [7&8]3.6.3)
Writes a minimum of five proficient multi-paragraph** writing samples in five different formats (both fiction
and non-fiction) such as: narrative/creative, poetry, autobiographical, explanatory (including: explaining a
process, compositions that define, compositions that give reasons), summaries, scientific reports, and
business letters (persuasive).(GLE [7&8]3.2.1, 3.2.2 [8]3.2.4)
Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety, and subtlety of meaning in relation to the
purpose and audience.
Articulates and exhibits knowledge of the 6-Traits.
Applies the writing process independently (prewriting, drafting, evaluating, revising, proofreading,
publishing or presenting).
Practices self-reflection to improve writing.   (GLE [9&10]4.4.1)

Analyzes strengths and weaknesses in writing of peers. (GLE [9&10]4.4.1)

Applies note-taking skills in a variety of situations. (GLE [9&10]4.4.2)

Writes a minimum of five proficient writing samples (multiple paragraphs**): each in a different genre (both
fiction and non-fiction) such as: narrative/creative, poetry, autobiographical, explanatory (including:
explaining a process, compositions that define, compositions that give reasons, persuasive writing),
summaries, research papers, scientific reports (see Write Source handbooks).(GLE [9&10]4.2.2)
  Part of Project that
Addresses this Standard                                                   TE Standards addressed in Radio Essay Project
use of recording devices and
other forms during assignment       TE.04.14 Use 4 Forms of Tech
using inspiration, switching to
iCal for WR class calendar
(optional)                          TE.04.13 Tech Planning Tools

mini lesson, quiz, use/creation
of own files for radio essay        TE.04.15 File Format and Size

use of web, inspiration, garage
band, other editing software,
iTunes/Podcast, iMovie, etc.        TE.04.16 Create Multimedia Project
downloading audio clips, MP4
files, podcasts for layering and
examples                            TE.05.03 Downloads from Internet
using mP3/sound files for
layering (radio essay), using
video/picts for iMovie (optional,
on own time)                        TE.05.10 Import Digital Media
typing narrative essay (.doc),
writing/typing rubric (.xls),
using inspiration, etc.,
using/creating picts (.jpg--
optional), creating iMovie
(.mov--optional)                    TE.05.11 Creates a Variety of Documents
use of web, inspiration, garage
band, other editing software,
iTunes/Podcast, iMovie, etc.;
final publication of Radio Essay
or iMovie                           TE.05.14 Creates Multimedia Presentation
creating/adding this publicaiton
to a page (optional)               TE.05.15 Personal Web Page
publication of project             TE.06.04 Format and Player Usage

creating/adding this publicaiton
to a page (optional)               TE.06.08 Web Tools for Self
completing this project for
Writing Class                      TE.06.09 Tech Integration
TE Standards addressed in Radio Essay Project
  Can use 4 various forms of technology, with assistance (i.e.. digital camera, digital video cameras,
  printers, scanners, flash drive, video conferencing, external hard drives etc.)


  Uses a technology tool to organize and plan (e.g. iCal, Inspiration).

  Explains various standard file formats (.pdf, .doc, .jpg, .xls, .ppt, .mov, .mp3, AIFF, .zip, .gif) and
  relative size.

  Use technology tools (e.g. multimedia authoring, presentation, web tools, digital cameras,
  scanners) for individual writing, communication, and desktop publishing to create knowledge
  product for audiences.


  Individually downloads items designated by instructor (internet, PODcasts, etc.).




  Import digital media (i.e.. video & photos).




  Independently uses and creates a variety of documents.




  Independently creates a presentation using a variety of media and archive to CD/DVD.
Web Creation (personal web page creation with CMS or blog / works on a collaborative website or
blog)
Understands a variety of image, audio, and video formats and associated players.


Uses the web for self expression/project (blogs, web pages, forums).

Independently uses a variety of technology tools to complete project(s) in other content area(s).
Radio Essay Project Provide specific timeline with a series of deadlines… my students had 5 days of mini-les
            Dates              List of Activities
                               Listen to 2 radio essays (Ira Glass, etc. or you can use student samples: http:/
                               Watch 1 narrative iMovie (Jack Black, etc.)
                               Show standard(s) and rubric met through RE Project
                               Word & Excel Mini-Lessons
                               Use inspiration for prewrite
                               Draft Narrative
                               Type Narrative
                               Practice Reading Out Loud and Timing
                               Revise
                               Cut to 5 minutes or less
                               Revise
                               Edit
                               Garage Band
                               Audio Record
                               Choose radio essay or imovie
                               Look at different suffixes (.doc, .mp3, etc.)
                               Practice downloading/importing
                               Add layers (music, sound effects)
                               Import pics/video if applicable
                               Final Product



Possible Elements for Tech Mini-lessons:
            WORD
changing font
headers, dif. 1st page, footers
shortcuts
spacing, alignment, bullets, columns
return, tab
inserting tables, symbols, page numbers
macros (disable to avoid spread of virus)
shapes, transparency, selection, images
comments
ine with a series of deadlines… my students had 5 days of mini-lessons related to this project, and then had 2 months to complete thei



ssays (Ira Glass, etc. or you can use student samples: http://unalakleet.bssd.org/index.php?option=com_content&task=vi
iMovie (Jack Black, etc.)
and rubric met through RE Project

prewrite


ut Loud and Timing




uffixes (.doc, .mp3, etc.)
ng/importing
  sound effects)
 f applicable




            EXCEL
            sorting
            return, tab, shift-tab, arrows
            re-selecting text
            functions
            formatting cells (merging, wrapping, aligning, etc.)
            changing row/column size
            changing font
            adding, naming worksheet
hen had 2 months to complete their Radio Essays while continuing writing workshop with other samples.

						
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