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Evaluation and Guidance
    Lecturer: Wang Xue
Qingdao No. 9 Middle School
    作文题目
  实施素质教育以来,我市许多
高中纷纷开设了英语阅读课,请结
合亲身体会,谈一下开展英语阅读
课的好处。
• 上档(18---29)
• 一.优秀(26—29)
• 要点全面紧扣主题,观点表达充分,能有效使用连接成
  分,具备较强的书面表达能力。语言小错不超过四个,
  不能有一处大错。
• 二.良好(22---25)
• 要点全面紧扣主题,观点表达较充分,语言有少量错误,
  (大错不超过三个。)但基本不影响意思表达。
• 三.一般(18—21)
• 要点全面,紧扣主题。语言表达基本充分,语言错误影
  响部分意思的表达,但多数句子基本正确。
小错误:单词拼写,冠词,区分
 大小写,标点符号错误
大错误:搭配错误,词语用错,
 (介词,名词,动词,形容词
 副词,主谓一致,非谓语动词,
 句式结构)
        Some big mistakes in your
               composition
    As
1. With the development of quality
 education, …
2.A lot of people are in favor of open
                                  opening
 the English reading courses.
3.It is good for us that have some
                     to
 English reading courses.
       learn
4.So learning English well can help
  us to communicate with foreigners
  easily.
5.The more books we read, the more
  learned we became.
   we will learn.
6.As far as I’m concerned, we should
  have more English reading courses
  we can.
 as possible as we can.
    Recently, many high schools in our city set the English
reading courses. They aimed to develop students’ interest of
reading. As the development of quality education, the skill of
English reading is more and more important.
    Nowadays, it is common to speak English. Many people like
it because English reading has been playing an increasingly
important role in our day-to-day life. So a lot of people are in
favor of open the English reading courses.
    In my view, it is good for us that have some English reading.
Why do we need to set the English reading courses? The first
reason is that English reading can develop our interest of
English. In addition, we can learn English better and better
through it. In the modern wold, English is one of the most
important languages, so learn English well can help us to
communicate with foreigners easily.
    On the whole, running English reading courses is a good
way to promote our English! It has so many advantages.
   Recently, more and more schools open English
reading courses as well as our school.
   It is universally acknowledged that English is
indispensable to us, on no account can we ignore
the value of English reading courses. First of all,
English reading courses help us know more
knowledge without schoolbooks, and we can learn
the world completely. Secondly, it will improve our
achievement. For example, we can master the
writing skills step by step. Furthermor, we can relax
ourselves and reduce our stress from study life.
  No one can deny that the knowledge of
schoolbook is important, but the more books we read,
the more learned we became. As far as I’m
concerned, we should have more English reading
courses we can.
    Recently, many high schools in our city set the English
reading courses. They aimed to develop students’ interest of
reading. As the development of quality education, the skill of
English reading is more and more important.
    Nowadays, it is common to speak English. Many people like
it because English reading has been playing an increasingly
important role in our day-to-day life. So a lot of people are in
favor of open the English reading courses.
    In my view, it is good for us that have some English reading.
Why do we need to set the English reading courses? The first
reason is that English reading can develop our interest of
English. In addition, we can learn English better and better
through it. In the modern wold, English is one of the most
important languages, so learn English well can help us to
communicate with foreigners easily.               一般:20
    On the whole, running English reading courses is a good
way to promote our English! It has so many advantages.
   Recently, more and more schools open English
reading courses as well as our school.
   It is universally acknowledged that English is
indispensable to us, on no account can we ignore
the value of English reading courses. First of all,
English reading courses help us know more
knowledge without schoolbooks, and we can learn
the world completely. Secondly, it will improve our
achievement. For example, we can master the
writing skills step by step. Furthermor, we can relax
ourselves and reduce our stress from study life.
  No one can deny that the knowledge of
schoolbook is important, but the more books we read,
the more learned we became. As far as I’m
concerned, we should have more English reading
courses we can.
                      良好:24
   Game strategies ?

Composition strategies
Strategy 1:
   Avoid some mistakes, especially
 the big mistakes.
Why was the composition given a high
mark?                优秀习作 28分
    In order to put quality education into practice, many
 senior middle schools have arranged English reading
 courses in our city.
     In modern society, English reading courses have
 been playing an important role. On one hand, it not
 only enriches ourselves a lot, but also makes us
 learn more about the world and become more
 knowledgeable by reading. At the same time, we are
 free to read what interests us most and thus we can
 be keen on our English study. On the other hand, we
        elarge
 can enlarge our vocabulary through reading, which
 is basic for our English study. What’s more, reading
 makes us relaxed and reduces our stress.
    In conclusion, I think it’s wise to arrange English
 reading courses for the senior middle school students.
              Strategy
2. Use connectives and advanced
  vocabulary.
3. Make up fluent and complex
  sentences to get high marks.
  Composition strategies
• Avoid some mistakes, especially
  the big mistakes.
• Use connectives and advanced
  vocabulary.
• Make up fluent and complex
  sentences to get high marks.
  Write a composition

—— by using Composition
     Strategies
  2009年全国城市运动会将在山东举
行。作为东道主,你感觉身边还存在许
多不文明行为,请你根据以下提示,号
召广大师生从我做起,杜绝不文明行为。
 城市运动会— National Games
1. 不文明行为
2. 不文明行为的影响
3. 你的建议和措施
  Composition strategies
• Avoid some mistakes, especially
  the big mistakes.
• Use connectives and advanced
  vocabulary.
• Make up fluent and complex
  sentences to get high marks.
        Assignment
    Finish this composition and
better it by using some
connectives, advanced vocabulary
and complex sentences.

				
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