The Big, Bad Wolf
Jack was skidding along the old, dusty road to sell his cow. Suddenly, in a
puff of smoke, an old, thin man appeared with a fierce wolf!
“Young boy, would you be kind enough to trade your cow for my wolf?” he
in a croaky voice.
“OF COURSE NOT!” Jack shouted.
Suddenly, Jack heard a voice. Not the man’s or his. The wolf was
opening his mouth. He was saying…
“Take me, take me, take me.” Jack was gasping for words.
“B, b, but. OH FINE!” Jack screamed.
He took the wolf home and put it in the garden. He dug a hole in the ground
and covered it up with leaves and branches.
“OI, SLUG, WHY DON’T YOU INVITE LITTLE PINK HOODIE YOUR GIRL
FRIEND TO DINNER?” shouted Jack’s mum sarcastically.
“MUM SHE IS NOT MY GIRL FRIEND!” replied Jack.
WELL, YOUR FRIEND THEN” she shouted back.
“FINE” said Jack. He went to the red telephone to ring little pink hoodie. RING RING.
“Hello?” said little pink hoodie.
“Hi, it’s Jack.
“Oh hi, what’s up?” she asked.
“Well would you like to come for tea?” asked Jack
“Sure” she replied. Then she hung up. Jack just shrugged and walked away. He stopped , remembering the
“MUM!!!” shrieked Jack.
“WHAT!!!!!” she shouted back even louder!!!
“I SWAPPED THE COW FOR A WOLF” he said.
“YOU WHAT???!!!” she shouted so loud that the whole house shook!
During this little pink hoodie was coming through the front gate. She was skipping with joy when
“AAAAGGGGHHHH!” She fell into a deep, dark hole. She landed with a thump.
“OOWWWW!!!! she shrieked. She stood up thinking what was she going to do when she caught a glimpse
of an orange jelly bean. By this time she was starving. She carefully picked it up and popped it into her
Suddenly, she felt a tingle in her stomach. Then, she started to grow!!! She grew and grew and grew. She
could now climb out of he hole. As she climbed out, she started to shrink back to her normal size. A
vicious, fearsome wolf appeared.
“AAGGHH!!!!” she screamed as the wolf ran towards her. SNAP, SNAP, SNAP!
Inside the house Jack and his mum had heard the scream. They rushed out of the house. As soon as they
opened the door the wolf was on them!
“Uh oh!” they both shouted . SNAP, SNAP, SNAP!
The wolf had eaten them.
Now grandma had also been invited for dinner that night. She opened Jack’s gate.
“GRR, WHO DARES COME IN MY TERRITORY?” the wolf asked.
“ME duh!” granny answered with attitude.
“THEN I SHALL EAT YOU!!!!!” shouted the wolf.
“OH NO YOU WON’T!” granny shouted back. In a puff of smoke she turned into SUPER GRANNY!
“Ha ya!” she kicked him in the bottom. He clutched his rear end in surprise.
“HA PA YA!” she punched him in the nose and he screamed like a 5 year old girl!
“YAYAYA!” she knocked him out! She got an axe and cut him in half. POP, little pink hoodie popped out.
POP, Jack popped out. POP, Jack’s mum popped out.
After all this they had a terrific party with tons of food. The main course was the wolf!
By Lily Mason Year 5 Aged 10