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									                                       Form for submission of comments on the Compost Quality Protocol

In order to make the compilation of comments as simple as possible, please submit them on the attached form, via email to: jeremy@organics-recycling.org.uk

The cut-off date for comments is end of Friday 8th July 2011.
N.B.: AfOR will only accept comments from its members and organisations that are part of AfOR’s Compost Certification Scheme.

It would be helpful if each comment made one point only, was clearly separated from the others and was structured as follows, in clause order:
         clause/sub-clause number;
         paragraph/table number;
         type of comment (general or technical);
         comment (with rationale behind the comment);
         proposed change.

Example comments (taken from a different document for illustration purposes)

    Clause/        Paragraph/       Type of comment                Comment (with rationale)                          Proposed change
   subclause          Table        (General/Technical)
 2.3.1           Note              General             The note is not needed because the manual will       Remove the note.
                                                       have a longer life than the information about
                                                       improvements to the IT system.
 4.5.2           Micro breaks      Technical           It might be helpful to advise candidates taking a    Add the following wording:
                                                       micro-break to look at a distant fixed point.        Candidates should be advised to
                                                                                                            focus on a distant point during micro-
                                                                                                            breaks.
Project title: Compost Quality Protocol                  Draft no: 27.06.11 Final for consultation
Commentator:                                             Date:
Organisation:                                            (Cut-off date:) Friday 8th July 2011

 Clause/         Paragraph/       Type of comment                 Comment (with rationale)           Proposed change
subclause          Table              (General/
                                  technical/editorial)

								
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