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					Compare the advantages and disadvantages of
three of the following as media for
communicating information. State which you
consider to be the most effective
Comics
Books
Radio
Television
Film
Theatre

Media is a sign of 21st century andwhich we
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call it as information eracentury, all kinds of
media get into people’s life, such as film, radio,
television and so on. Radio, Television and
Film are promoting the development of
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modern people’s life and thoughts. I think
television is the most effective way of
spreading information among people.
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Television is a quiet common way to convey
transmit information to people. The biggest
strength of television is to satisfyied with
people’s needs for with news ’ details and
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comments .For radio, it is the most convenient
way to supply news for to people. People can
hear radio on the way or at home. Film is a
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people’s spirits.
Every media medium has itstheir own
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deficiencyweaknesses. Television may cause
some criminales. Some youngsters tend to
imitate some criminale scenes or manners
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which are played on television. Radio can
carrybring the latest news to people,
althoughhowever the newscontent sometimes
fail to present true informationcould not be
described in details. Film          can only
responsereflects a part of social situation,
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which mightcould mislead some of people.
In summary, I am convinced thatbelieve
television is the most effective way.
ItTelevision presents all kinds of information
including       useful     knowledge      and
entertainments. What is more, iIt balances
people’s life and work. Overall, If
governments can enact some relevant laws to
regulate its content, avoids the crime details, I
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think television would be a perfect way to
communicating information.
5分
 Task response: 回应题目要求;有主要观点,但观点 有限并且论证不够充
分,有不相关细节。


Lexical resource: 使用有限词汇量,但只是在最低层面上满足题目 ,用词也不
准确

Grammar: 只能使用有限的句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准
确性不如简单句;基础语法错误较多

Coherence and cohesion: 信息有一定组织但缺少总体延续性;衔接手段不
充分,不准确,缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多



首先字数没有达到要求影响了你的分数,其次存在太多的语法错

误,用词也比较简单,偏口语化,建议好好扎实你的语法基础,

分数才能有质的飞跃!~期待你的进步

				
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