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  WRITING TECHNIQUE
WHY ARE WE LEARNING THIS.
 MAKING A STRONG EFFORT TO
  BECOME MORE EFFICIENT WRITERS.
 IMPLEMENT STRUCTURE TO
  PARAGRAPHS.
 TIE COMMENTARY AND FACTS BACK
  TO THE MAIN IDEA OF PARAGRAPH.
 BUILD THE WRITING LIKE A
  CRESENDO.
STEP 1: Topic Sentence
Topic: DREAMERS
 Clearly states the main idea of the
  paragraph.
 Underline in RED.
 Ex: The world needs more dreamers,
  without them barriers remain
  unbroken.
Step 2: Concrete
Detail/Commentary- Bing
 Concrete detail: Supports the main
  idea with a fact.
 Concrete Detail: Underline in Blue.
 Commentary: Writer’s opinion on the
  fact in relation to the main idea.
 Commentary: Underline in Green.
Bing: Concrete Detail: Commentary
 Walt Disney, a true innovator opened
  Disney Land in 1955.
 Without his vision and drive towards
  excellence, millions of Disney dreams
  would remain unfulfilled.
Bang: Concrete Detail:
Commentary
 To strengthen this argument, Michael
  Jordan, a true dreamer was cut from
  his high school basketball team only
  to become one of the most decorated
  sports athletes in history.
 Michael Jordan, a model of strength
  and determination is a true dreamer
  and example of excellence.
BOOM: Concrete Detail:
Commentary
 Barack Obama, a man that envisions
  himself as the first African American
  man to dawn the U.S. Presidency.
 A true dreamer, this man believes in
  his heart that he can annihilate the
  discrimination barriers at the core of
  this nation.
Conclusion Sentence:
 Restate the main idea in a different
  light.
 Paraphrase the main idea.
 Underline in RED.
 Dreamers defy the odds, they break
  social, economic and prejudicial
  barriers, we need more of them!
The Big Picture
   The world needs more dreamers, without them barriers remain
    unbroken.
   Walt Disney, a true innovator opened Disney Land in 1955.
   Without his vision and drive towards excellence, millions of Disney
    dreams would remain unfulfilled.
   To strengthen this argument, Michael Jordan, a true dreamer was
    cut from his high school basketball team only to become one of the
    most decorated sports athletes in history.
   Michael Jordan, a model of strength and determination is a true
    dreamer and example of excellence.
   Barack Obama, a man that envisions himself as the first African
    American man to dawn the U.S. Presidency.
   A true dreamer, this man believes in his heart that he can
    annihilate the discrimination barriers at the core of this nation.
   Dreamers defy the odds, they break social, economic and
    prejudicial barriers, we need more of them!

				
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