Simplify Novel Revision with These Best in Practice Methods

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Novel Revision is Key Aspect of Writing

Novel Revision is a key process of novel writing, but to the detriment of many an
aspiring author, it is often overlooked and/or misunderstood. Having knocked off that
first draft of a novel – the one you’ve already spent hours, months, sometimes even
years writing – you might think that the really hard work is done. But it is not done. In
many ways it’s just beginning. The reason we have a manuscript “first draft” is that
there are subsequent drafts.

For some, the second draft means running a final spell check, cleaning up punctuation,
and they may go as far as removing some of their overzealous adverbs and adjectives.
They then declare their work a finished novel.

But not so fast. There is much more to novel revision than spelling and grammar. Much
more. Revising a manuscript is a big job, and one that an aspiring author cannot afford
to skip.

Objectivity – the Key to Novel Revision

The new writer tends to be overly attached to their writing and is reluctant to remove
any part of it. This is the first thing a novelist must overcome. Novel revision calls for
objectivity – it’s not an easy thing. Sometimes we think we’ve written the perfect
snappy line of dialogue, the most beautiful scene, and there’s no way you want to edit it
out of your novel.

Advice: don’t be too much in love with your own writing. If something isn’t working to
either move the story or reveal more about your characters – get rid of it. You don’t
have to press the delete button, forever banishing your beloved words into exile. Create
a document where you keep just this sort of thing – beloved writing not yet used – just
cut it from your manuscript and paste it into that document. You may find another use
for that sweet baby in another novel.

Novel Writing Tip: The new writer tends to be overly attached to their writing and is
reluctant to remove any part of it. This is the first thing a novelist must overcome.
Novel Revision After the First Draft

Novel revision means starting at the beginning and reading through the manuscript
word by word, line by line, paragraph by paragraph and chapter by chapter looking at
a lot of things at once. Revision is a complicated process, but knowing what to look for
certainly helps.

To facilitate the revision process, start by making three lists with the following

1. Characters

2. Timeline

3. Plot Tracking

As you go through your manuscript you will pay attention to each of these items and
either make instant corrections for easy items or make notes that you’ll use to correct
the manuscript at the end of the revision process when you can observe your
manuscript as a whole (vs. looking at each word, line, chapter). Let’s look in more detail
at how paying attention to these 3 items will help to revise a manuscript.

Novel Revision – Characters

Look at how each character is introduced – as you read it in the manuscript, not as the
sketch of character traits you initially defined for the character. Using your Character
List, write down how you’ve described the character’s name, appearance, primary
traits, etc. Do this for each character as they are introduced. Your Character List might
look like this:

Novel Revision Character List

      Haley Cavanaugh – born 1988, 5’7”, brown eyes, honey-gold hair, single mother of one
       child, whose father left without a good-bye, working her way through college with part-
       time jobs; determined, resourceful, organized. Mistrusts relationships and is afraid of
       being hurt again.
      James Burns – born 1979…

As you continue reading, make notes of anything that conflicts with that initial

For example:
       If a character is initially described as perky but later in the story you’ve written
       scenes that show him/her feeling depressed on any number of days, that might
       be inconsistent with what your readers have come to know about your character.
       This is something you will consider revising.
       If you state that your character is 37 years old but you have a 35th birthday party
       for the character, you will need to figure out how old your character really is and
       write it accordingly.
      Point of view is another element to watch out for – make sure that the
       character whose Point of View you are using is only relating information that
       they could know through their history, sight, perceptions or discussion with
       other characters, etc.

It’s all about keeping track of a character’s identity and ensuring its consistency
throughout the manuscript. I once wrote a novel where the character names were so
similar to each other (in my mind anyway) that I had attached certain dialogue to the
wrong character. Having found the error during revision, I was able to correct it. If I
hadn’t done so, I would have had some very confused readers.

You can finish reading this article on our website about novel revision timeline.

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