FM.AdvertisingPro: hey, you there?
If you need any change in my writing procedure could you inform?
FM.AdvertisingPro: sorry, I was checking my email. Over here the word peculiar mean
Don't worry, I am changing all of them. Keep working.
me: Thank you.
FM.AdvertisingPro: The bullet point: Toner Cartridge will last you for XX reams of paper
(yield/500= # of reams)
I see you aren't using any of it. Is there some confusion?
I see you're not using them on all the descriptions.
me: Yes. It is due to some confusion. But please look at some latest reviews wherein I have
mentioned that. I hope one ream of paper is equal to 500 sheet of paper. Is it correct?
FM.AdvertisingPro: several others. But you are using it the correct way.
yes it is!
I will be in Mexico for about 5 days. I am taking off tomorrow, but I'll be working from the hotel.
So you might not hear from me tomorrow.
me: Yes. Thank you. My request is if you find any mistake please let me know.
FM.AdvertisingPro: are you familiar with SEO?
me: I am not so familiar with it.
FM.AdvertisingPro: take ID 352. I am trying to get that page ranking for "HP P4014 toner".
Also "HP P4014 64a" toner. Try to keep the words together. Whenever you use the word
cartridge, put the word toner in front of it so it comes out toe "toner cartridge".
I'll do 354
me: Yes, sure
Yes, I saw the description in 354
FM.AdvertisingPro: ok, that's it. next
I don't know if that's 180 words or not, but that is completely seo'd.
Also, I am targeting big companies, not the home based business. So we have to look like a
I will make changes in the coming reviews.
FM.AdvertisingPro: We already have the toner ready to be shipped. You sentence "We are
ready to make this model available wherever you are." sounds like we haven't made it yet.
Again, don't worry. I'm behind you taking care of this.
me: Certainly i will make changes in the above cases.
FM.AdvertisingPro: Use words that are related to toner: Print, cost per print, toner, printer,
laser printer, page yield, toner cartridge, compatible toner, stuff like that.
me: Yes. I will
FM.AdvertisingPro: Try to stick to the positive side of things. You wrote: We are not ready to
give you low quality products. We are not ready to destroy your hard-earned money.
me: Yes, I got it
FM.AdvertisingPro: A white American lady will be discouraged when she reads this.
me: I can improve it in the coming reviews
These are all the things I am expecting from you. I am now fully aware of the route to which I
have to go.
FM.AdvertisingPro: You wrote: As we have our own in house engineers, the quality of the
products we are manufacturing will have a unique look and style that no other companies can
The toner does not have a unique look and style. The outside shell is actualy an HP cartridge.
me: Yes, I think of the customer who must be attracted by the outward beauty of the toner.
However I will do what you have instructed
FM.AdvertisingPro: You wrote: "The factory, having more than 210,000 sq/ft of area, is
efficiently used by us to make our toner producing streamlined." In cases like this use "Our
"The factory" can mean someone elses factory.
me: yes,i will change it
FM.AdvertisingPro: Okay, I am taking off to get something to eat. You might not hear from me
for 2 days. I will try writing more ID's for you.