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Persuasive Messages: Sales Openings To bring out the point of getting attention effectively by holding out the prospect of a reader benefit, let's compare and analyze some beginnings. Persuasive Messages: Sales a. Did you know that now you can own a boat that stores neatly in your closet, fits into your car trunk for transporting, and can be set up and launched almost anywhere? Persuasive Messages: Sales b. You can now own a boat that stores neatly in your closet, fits into your car trunk for transporting, and launches almost anywhere. Persuasive Messages: Sales c. Our Zodiac Simplex sells complete with floorboards, oarlocks, outboard motor bracket, and a transom assembly. Persuasive Messages: Sales In just ten minutes, without help you can have your boat out of your car trunk and launched. Persuasive Messages: Sales e. Would you like to keep your boat in your clothes closet? Persuasive Messages: Sales Psychological Description To show the points of using you- viewpoint and guarding against stark physical product description, analyze the following paragraphs: Persuasive Messages: Sales a. As you step on the secure floorboards that stiffen the fabric bottom for stability, you'll feel secure. If you hoose to row, you have oarlocks; or if you choose to motor, you have a bracket that hooks your motor securely. Persuasive Messages: Sales b. You can set your Simplex up on a riverbank, a beach, or a boat dock with equal ease. Imagine the convenience--no trailer to pull, park, or worry about while you're away from your car, and no boat slip to pay rent on every month. Persuasive Messages: Sales References to Prices a. And the price is the best of all! At only $531, it includes the floorboards and outboard motor bracket. You'll save a good part of that the first year alone in slip rental fees (or avoid crowding your car out of the garage)--and take your convenient Zodiac Simplex wherever you want to go for years. Persuasive Messages: Sales b. Where else can you get a 3- passenger boat for $531? That price covers floorboards and the outboard motor bracket. Persuasive Messages: Sales c. For around $1.50 a day for a year, you can own a 3-passenger Zodiac Simplex. Persuasive Messages: Sales d. For $531 (about $1.50 a day for a year), you can own this inflatable dinghy. This per-day charge is probably less than your gas while hauling it. Persuasive Messages: Sales References to Enclosures a. As you can see by the attached brochure, fishermen all over the country have testified to the convenience and capability of the Zodiac Simplex, You'll be proud to own a boat with its features at such a reasonable price. Persuasive Messages: Sales b. We have enclosed a brochure picturing the inflatable dinghy that is tested and approved by the U.S. Coast Guard in all types of waters. Persuasive Messages: Sales c. Turn to page 4 of the enclosure and read what the U.S. Coast Guard says about the test it ran on the Zodiac Simplex. Persuasive Messages: Sales d. You can set up your Zodiac Simplex (as shown on page 4 of the enclosed brochure on a river bank, a beach, or a boat dock with ease in ten minutes. Persuasive Messages: Sales Action endings a. Just complete the attached postage- paid card and return it to us today. We'll send you complete information on the benefits and convenience of owning the new Zodiac Simplex the same day we hear from you. Persuasive Messages: Sales b. By checking the box on the reply card, you will authorize us to send you complete information on how to order the ZODIAC SIMPLEX. Persuasive Messages: Sales c. To have your Zodiac Simplex ready for early-morning fishing trips, just fill out the attached order card, charging to Visa or Master Charge if you like. Then sit back and dream of the five-pounders you will soon be boating. Persuasive Messages: Sales d. If you should wish to order the Zodiac Simplex, write us a letter authorizing us to do so. You can send a check, money order, or pay for it on your Visa or Master Charge cards.