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                Ballot Comment
      Company                    Type                                                                                                                                                                                                        Incorporated into          SWG2.5
                                                    Section            Printed Page   PDF Page   Line Number                         Comment                                   Supporting Contribution   Text Contribution   Status   Date         Text          Note   Impact
LGE                   1                 Editorial   12.1.2             12-1             793           13       The order of section is different from that in chapter
                                                                                                               13. The section 12.1.2 should be changed to section
                                                                                                               12.2.
LGE                   2                 Editorial   12.1.6.2           12-5             797                    Put a comma in front of "or" in Figure 12.1.6.2-2.

LGE                   3                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.1         12-36            828          23        Change "through Figure 12.2.1.3.1-5 " to "and
                                                                                                               Figure 12.2.1.3.1-4".
LGE                   4                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.1         12-37            829           6        Change Figure 12.2.1.3.1-4 to Figure 12.2.1.3.1-5.

LGE                   5                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.3         12-41            833                    Change binay to binary in Figure 12.2.1.3.1-4.
LGE                   6                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.2         12-43            835          16        Add " and Figure 12.2.1.3.1-2" before period.
LGE                   7                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.3.3       12-47            839          3         Change "Figure 12.2.1.3.1-3." to Figure 12.2.1.3.1-
                                                                                                               4.".
LGE                   8                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.7         12-58            850          10        Add Figure 12.2.1.3.1-3 because it contains Walsh
                                                                                                               cover assignment for the Traffic Channel.
LGE                   9                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.8         12-58            850       28 and 35    Add Figure 12.2.1.3.1-4 because it contains
                                                                                                               quadrature spread for the Traffic Channel.
LGE                  10                 Editorial   12.2.1.3.8.3       12-62            854           4        Add Figure 12.2.1.3.1-4 because it contains
                                                                                                               baseband filtering for the Traffic Channel.
LGE                  11                 Editorial   12.3.1.3.1         12-70            862                    In Figure 12.3.1.3.1-1, change binay to binary.
LGE                  12                 Editorial   12.3.1.3.2.3.5.1   12-90            882       25 and 27    Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  13                 Editorial   12.3.1.3.2.3.5.2   12-91            883        8 and 10    Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  14                 Editorial   12.3.1.3.2.3.5.3   12-92            884        8 and 10    Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  15                 Editorial   13.2.1.1           13-1             897            8       change 13.2.1.1 to 13.2.1
LGE                  16                 Editorial   13.7.1.2.3.2       13-34            930           34       Add to the comma after "mod 4 = 0".
LGE                  17                 Editorial   13.7.1.2.4.1       13-37            933            7       Change DeltaACKChannelGainMUP to
                                                                                                               DeltaAckChannelGainMUP.
LGE                  18                 Editorial   Global                                                     ACKChannelGain or AckChannelGain, Which one is
                                                                                                               correct?
LGE                  19                 Editorial   13.7.1.2.4.1       13-37            933          17        change "the nth half slot n" to "the nth half slot"
LGE                  20                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1         13-39            935          29        Put a comma in front of "and".
LGE                  21                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1         13-39            935          36        Put a comma in front of "or".
LGE                  22                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1         13-42            938                    Clear Figure 13.7.1.3.1-1 up.
LGE                  23                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1         13-45            941                    Clear Figure 13.7.1.3.1-2 up.
LGE                  24                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1.1       13-52            948           5        Put a comma in front of "respectively".
LGE                  25                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.1.1       13-55            951           1        Remove colon in the caption of Table 13.7.1.3.1.1-2.

LGE                  26                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.2         13-56            952          20        Remove colon in the caption of Figure 13.7.1.3.2-1.

LGE                  27                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3         13-57            953           19       1843.2kbps is optional for access terminal
LGE                  28                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3         13-57            953       25 and 26    Remove "size" in …for the transmitted payload size.

LGE                  29                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3.2       13-58            954           2        "sub-packet index" should be changed to "symbol
                                                                                                               representing the sub-packet identifier".
LGE                  30                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3.2       13-58            954          26        Remove colon in the caption of Table 13.7.1.3.3.2-1.

LGE                  31                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3.2       13-60            956           1        Remove colon in the caption of Table 13.7.1.3.3.2-2.

LGE                  32                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3.3       13-60            956          15        change Figure 13.7.1.3.3.3-1 to Figure 13.7.1.3.1-6

LGE                  33                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.3.3       13-61            957           4        Remove colon in the caption of Figure 13.7.1.3.3.3-
                                                                                                               1.
LGE                  34                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.4.1       13-67            963          10        Access channel only use code rate 1/4.
LGE                  35                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.6         13-78            974        11, 12      delete line 11 and 12, which is incorrect and
                                                                                                               redundant
LGE                  36                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.6.1       13-78            974          28        change "five" to "three".
LGE                  37                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.6.1       13-78            974          29        change "V1" to "V'0".
LGE                  38                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.6.2       13-79            975        11, 27      delete "If K > 3, then the symbols … at level k.",
                                                                                                               which is incorrect. Moreover, K=1 or 3 for reverse
                                                                                                               link.
LGE                  39                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.6.2       13-81            977           1        Remove colon in the caption of Table 13.7.1.3.6.2-1.

LGE                  40                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.7         13-81            977           6        Put a comma in front of "and".
LGE                  41                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.7         13-81            977          13        Remove a bracket.
LGE                  42                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.7         13-81            977          21        Use parentheses in stead of brackets.
LGE                  43                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.7         13-82            978           3        Put a comma in front of "and".
LGE                  44                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.7         13-82            978          14        Change DeltaACKChannelGainMUP to
                                                                                                               DeltaAckChannelGainMUP.
LGE                  45                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.8         13-82            978          28        Put "or both".
LGE                  46                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.8.3       13-83            979          14        Change Table 13.8.1.3.2.3.6.1-1 to Table
                                                                                                               13.7.1.3.8.3-1.
LGE                  47                 Editorial   13.7.1.3.8.5       13-85            981          1         Change "on" to "in".
LGE                  48                 Editorial   13.7.2.4           13-95            991          36        Change "the physical layer packet" to "the subpacket
                                                                                                               of a physical layer packet".
LGE                  49                 Editorial   13.7.2.4           13-96            992          14        Change "the physical layer packet" to "the subpacket
                                                                                                               of a physical layer packet".
LGE                  50                 Editorial   13.7.2.4           13-97             993          7        Remove colon in Figure 13.7.2.4-1
LGE                  51                 Editorial   13.7.2.4           13-98             994          2        Remove colon in Figure 13.7.2.4-2
LGE                  52                 Editorial   13.7.2.4           13-99             995          2        Remove colon in Figure 13.7.2.4-3
LGE                  53                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1         13-105           1001       1, 8, 13    Figure references are incorrect.
LGE                  54                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1         13-105           1001          5        Change "use" to "uses".
LGE                  55                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1         13-107           1003                   Clean Figure 13.8.1.3.1-1 up. Change "binay" to
                                                                                                               "binary".
LGE                  56                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1.1       13-109           1005       6 and 7     Change brackets to parentheses.
LGE                  57                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1.2       13-115           1011          9        Change brackets to parentheses.
LGE                  58                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.1.2       13-115           1011          12       Remove redundant "Transmission Format".




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                Ballot Comment
      Company                    Type                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Incorporated into          SWG2.5
                                                    Section            Printed Page   PDF Page     Line Number                           Comment                                  Supporting Contribution              Text Contribution   Status   Date         Text          Note   Impact
LGE                  59                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.1       13-115           1011            16         A Pilot Channel is not always transmitted. It is
                                                                                                                   transmitted only for the predefined time duration (96
                                                                                                                   chip duration per half-slot).
LGE                  60                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2       13-116           1012             9         MAC channel is BPSK or OOK modulated on each
                                                                                                                   phases
LGE                  61                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2       13-116           1012            13         Change Table 2.3.1.3.2.2-1 to Table 13.8.1.3.2.2-1.

LGE                  62                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2       13-117           1013             1         Remove colon in the caption of Table 13.8.1.3.2.2-1.

LGE                  63                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2       13-117           1013            3          delete "where … value".
LGE                  64                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2.2     13-121           1017            18         Table reference is not correct.
LGE                  65                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2.2     13-121           1017            30         Change 13.7.1.3.1 to 13.8.1.3.1
LGE                  66                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.2.2     13-121           1017            33         Change "DRCLockLength" to "4*DRCLockLength".

LGE                  67                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.3     13-136           1032             9          Change Table 2.3.1.3.2.3.3-1 to Table 13.8.1.3.2.3.3-
                                                                                                                    1.
LGE                  68                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.4     13-139           1035              4         delete "and Asynchronous"
LGE                  69                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.4.1   13-140           1036             15         Put "Table 13.8.1.3.2.3.4.1-1".
LGE                  70                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.5.1   13-143           1039     17, 18, 20, 21, 22 change "V1" to "V'0".

LGE                  71                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.5.3   13-144           1040            29         Remove colon in the caption of Table
                                                                                                                   13.8.1.3.2.3.5.3-1.
LGE                  72                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.6.1   13-146           1042         9 and 11      Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  73                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.6.2   13-147           1043         6 and 8       Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  74                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.2.3.6.3   13-148           1044         7 and 9       Change index i to k to match the Table.
LGE                  75                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.3         13-156           1052                       Change 3860 to 3840 in Figure 13.8.1.3.3-1.
LGE                  76                 Editorial   13.8.1.3.3         13-160           1056                       Change 3860 to 3840 in Figure 13.8.1.3.3-3.
                                                                                                                                                                                                               rejected                       0
                                                                                                                                                                                                               withdrawn                      0
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Accepted w/ mod                0
                                                                                                                                                                                                            76 open                           0     0%
                                                                                                                                                                                                               closed                         0
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Accepted                       0
                                                                                                                                                                                                               unaddressed                   76     100%
                                                                                                                                                                                                               total                         76




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