Part I. by Evan Frankel, November 13, 2010
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It was just an ordinary day for Max. He was watching the clock thinking
“when is math class over”. He liked doing math BUT HE DID NOT LIKE
MR.DARK the math instructor!!! “How I hate him” thought Max. Max often
passed Mr. dork (excuse me) Mr. dark in the hallways. It was not a pretty
picture. Max felt happy that he did not have math class a lot. But when he
did he usually doodled and drew pictures of how Mr. dark would look like as
a super villain. Then one day men with machine guns fell from the ceiling!!
(Just kidding).
One day max was walking in the hallways and he heard eerie noises coming
from the music room. Ooohh eee aaaahhh…but when Max walked in he saw
a terrible sight, Mr. dark mind controlling a police man!!!! Mr. dark turned
around a filthy grin on his face, he snapped his fingers and Max was
knocked from behind. When he awoke he saw Mr. dark? And then it all
came flooding back Mr. dark was trying to kill him. Max was scared, very
very scared. So naturally he screamed. Mr. dark was not expecting this. But
by the time the teachers got there Mr. dark was already hypnotizing Max.
Max noticed that Mr. dark had pressed the wrong button and that something
was happening to him and he didn’t know what. Before he could think
anymore thoughts Mr. dark had superhero-napped him. His sight went black.
A few minutes later he realized that he was in a car. When the car stopped
someone made him stand up, and with a whoosh the car drove away. Max
took the blindfold off and he knew where he was right away. He was in the
desert….
“Oh no,” said Max. To get his mind off being trapped in the middle of
nowhere, he thought of swords and knights . Khabam!!! A sword came out
of thin air. “This is so cool!” said Max. Maybe I could use this power to get
out of here.” Then he had an idea. “What if I made a car appear! Then I
could drive away!” So in his mind he thought of a car and cabboom!! A car
appeared. Now Max was only fifteen, so he couldn’t drive, but this was an
emergency and he had to. Fortunately his dad had taught him a thing or two.
He tried to remember how to drive. He tried and tried but he could not
remember, so he tried some more and bingo, he remembered…. Just as the
Police arrived. Max was disappointed that he did not get a chance to drive,
but he was happy that he was saved. “You’re saved,” said the policewoman.
“I know that,” grumbled Max.
When he got home he automatically went up to his room. And he had the
weirdest thoughts. “What if I used my power to help people in need,” then
snap!!! He was asleep. He awoke to the screams of citizens. “This is my
chance,” said Max. He was so excited he almost forgot to put on his
underwear. Since he new his mom wouldn’t let him go outside, so he had to
jump out the window. He thought of a parachute and garphoom!!! A
parachute appeared. Two seconds later GERONIMO!! He was out the
window. That’s when he saw what was going on. The bank had been
robbed. When he walked in, he had a familiar feeling. He saw the
for the first time. But the cytron was too quick and Movie Man
was blasted off his feet by a super sonic wave. He fell to the floor with a
plop! Before anything else could happen, the cytron was blasted off his feet
by a unique hammer thought up by Movie Man. 20 seconds later, the cytron
was in cuffs…. To be continued.
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Credits
Movie Man created by Evan Frankel.
Story written by Evan Frankel.
Story illustrated by Evan Frankel.
Batman created by Bob Kane.
About the Author
I used to invent lots and lots of super heroes.
Movie Man was one of my first and best.
I thought it would be cool to make it into a story.
Thank you for reading this story.
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