The Old Woman Adventure
Harry Chandler and Elizabeth
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Chapter 1
It was a hot Summer’s day on
Bramley Gardens, South Oxhey.
Elizabeth and Harry were really fed up
despite the fact it was their holiday.
They had played all their favourite
games. Harry had made twenty lego
models and Elizabeth had filled up all
her sketch book.
“ I’m so bored,” sighed Harry
“ I’m really, really bored too!”
moaned Elizabeth.
Just as they were about to start
screaming with boredom they both
heard a flop, plop, blipping sound. It
was something dropping on the front
door mat.
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They both rushed to the front door to see
what had just been delivered. It was a
leaflet. They both looked excitedly and read
out loud,
Gerry Marvel’s Mystery Funfair,
Lot’s of amazing rides.
Walters, Big Wheels, Carousels and many
more ….
Open 10:00 a.m until 7:00 p.m.
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“Wow that sounds brilliant!” Elizabeth said
watching Harry jumping up and down.
‘ Mum, please can we go to the fair?’
‘NO!’ snapped Mum.
‘Why not?' moaned the children.
‘It is far to dangerous that’s why', said mum.
‘But It is so much fun!’ begged both of them.
The kids where begging and begging until their
mum gave in.
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Chapter 2
Finally they saw the glittering fair and their
eyes were watering with excitement. The fair
had seventeen rollercoaster. Harry lined up for
four hours to go on the Dragoncarne.
Harry was getting impatient, tired and
annoyed. He could not wait to try the newest
ride with its terrifying ten loops.
“You can’t go on because there is a rumour an
old women got trapped in this ride and your far
too young to go on,” said Joe the rides
conductor.
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‘But my mum’s here,' said Harry jealously
“And………. What does that mean.”
‘’It means I can go on the ride’’.
‘’Oh no you can not, how old’s your mum,’’ asked
Joe.
‘’Forty-nine,’’ Harry replied.
The argument carried on.
Joe gave in.
“Fine you can go on the ride.”
“YIPPY", Harry cried out.
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But will Harry return safelyElizabeth 6
Chapter 3
When Harry got on the ride it stopped after a few minutes.
Suddenly the ride stopped….Surprised, Harry got off the ride,dizzily.
Harry ran over to find his sister Elizabeth, who was leaning against
a secret hidden door. At that moment the door flew open and the
two children flew into a darkened dusty room . An old grey haired
lady, dressed in black old rags grabbed the children by the scruff of
their necks.
“Your coming with me “ she screeched at the top of her voice. As her
black as night eyes glared at the children .She dragged the two
terrified youngsters to a small gloomy cupboard.
“Why are you being so mean?”
“Be quiet you two evil ones” She screamed ,spitting saliva in their
faces.
As she locked them in the children clung to each other feeling more
than frightened .What would happen to them?
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Chapter 4
Harry and Elizabeth were trembling they were wondering what
will happen to them. Right at that moment the old women
stamped down the stairs. “Help" the two screamed. Then there
mum walked up the stairs. But
they didn’t know it was their mum, they thought it was another
mean person.
“I hope that’s our mum”, They whispered to each other.
It was. When they saw her shadow, it looked like a
FREEKEY AND VERY SCARY
……… MONSTER!
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The shadow stayed there and the
children were wondering what will
happen to them.
“Oh what will happen to us,”
They said in there mind. Finally
their mum came in.
“Mum”, the two children shouted.
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Chapter 5
“Right you two are in trouble because I told you
not to go near a dangerous ride”, mum said.
“We didn’t know it was haunted”, they replied as
they walked towards the wall.
“I know you didn’t it’s just better to be save”.
Their mum said walking towards them.
“Right you are under arrest there,” shouted
mum as she glanced at the old women.
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She is getting the phone to phone 999.
Mum will you forgive us.
“Of course", there mum said cheerfully.
Mum can we have a bacansamwitch please”
“ OK”, said MUM
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