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					Priority   Location
           logos
           Title Screen
           1st Menu
           Ben & Holly
           Menu
           Text
           Flying Sequences




           Flying Sequences


           Credits
     B
           General
     A
Amendment
ABD logo to be moved in front of the Eone logo
Please stay on title for slightly longer
Change the colour of More Games & Credits text to dark blue - will avise n colour
The character of Holly and and Ben need to be the same size within the circles - so Holly needs to be made smaller so
she is the same size of Ben
RH wants the colour of the text to change - waiting for RH to tell me which colour
Ben still has a bumpy face and his head is too small and therefore his mouth is not positioned correctly. The colour
blue of his clothes does not match the style guide and also there is a line on him. His arm also looks blurred at times -
please check it is imperative that Ben as a key character matches the style guide. Again example in separate
document - Flying Sequences Issues
Please can you go through all the flying sequences artwork with a fine tooth comb and check that the layering is
correct so if a plant is suppose to be in front or behind another, it is and does this all the way up - example in
separate document - Flying Sequences Issues
add capitals to Project & Assets Manager. Also text still clipping flowers at the side especially towards the bottom -
please address
Audio levels need to be the same throughout the app – so for example Nanny is often louder and so the sound
distorts. Also in flying sequence when Gaston barks it is quiet than when Ben speaks. Please ensure all audio is at a
consistent but audible level.
Beast Comments   Decision                                                    Final Status
fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed




fixed


fixed            These are still overlapping but I will look at later and
                 send over specific instructions on what to do
fixed            Please check all audio levels as these still seem to vary
                 and some are not audible
Priority   Item/Location
           Shadow game


           Flying Sequence
           Shadow game
           Shadow Game
           Shadow Game
           Shadow game
Amendment
Remove the shadow from Gaston and also his legs need to move when he walks across the screen. Also when he
walks across the screen he moves upwards in a small loop - please make sure that he moves in a straight line. Gaston
also needs to start smiling earlier when Nanny Plum appears
Amend layering in the flying sequence(examples in separate doc)
Remove shadow from Nanny Plum - see separate doc
Lose white outline of objects when placed in scene- see separate doc
Remove Nanny's right hand as only partially visible - see separate doc
Remove outline around Gaston - see separate doc
Beast Comments   Decision   Final Status
fixed


fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed
Priority       Location
           A


               Recipe ingredients




                recipe menu
               Jam, Cup Cakes, Juice
               recipe
               Cooking
               exit screen
Amendment
Bug - clicked on help at end of flying sequence, then touched continue, got bowl with ingredients on screen, touched
exit and message appeared saying are you sure you want to exit but when touch yes nothing happens - game now
hug and can only exit by going back to apps menu
Soup - correct ingredients tomato, cabbage, carrot & orange. Incorrect sugar & egg
Cupcakes - correct ingredients - sugar, butter, apple & banana. Incorrect ingredients onion & potato
Jam - correct ingredients - Pear, plum, sugar & lemon. Incorrect ingredients - egg & cabbage
Pie - change incorrect ingredients to banana & black grapes
Juice - correct ingredients sugar, orange, plum & Lemon Incorrect courgette & Onion
Please amend ingredients so they match with the above
Screen showing ingredients after the flying sequence - please ensure ingredients are correct and match with the
changes
Change help screen so reads - Touch anywhere on screen to switch the cooker on
Bug - When this is called up when mixing bowl on screen and before sliced any ingredients - it does not work and
only way out is to exit whole game
Beast Comments   Decision   Final Status
fixed


fixed




fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed
Priority   location
           location
           Cauldron
           Scene
           Cauldron
    A      scene


           cauldron &
           final scene -
           all potions
           Cauldron
           scene
           Potions
           Menu
           Final scene
Amendment
There is still one toadstool floating in mid air in the flying sequence
Ben has a funny mark around his eyes when he blinks

Holly has line under her eyes when she blinks - artwork with RH for feedback



please ensure that Holly only leaps when the spell is done correctly - so king Thistle potion needs changing as Holly
leaps when potion is green and also on Nanny Plum spell as she leaps when potion is green. Can she do something
simple like blinking when it’s done wrong?
Also in the long hair spell section, before you go through to the long hair spell part, you already see Holly with
long hair here. She should really have short hair as in the other spells. - see separate doc
can Holly be more central in the middle here? She’s to one side which looks a bit odd, can she be positioned more
centrally like the other two characters here? - see separate doc
Holly has outline - please remove - see separate doc
Beast Comment   Decision                        Final Status
fixed
fixed

fixed           Please fix as I can still see
                the lines underneath her
                eyes when she blinks

fixed


fixed

fixed

fixed
Priority   Location
Amendment
Remove white outlines on animals - see separate doc
Beast Comment   Decision   Final Status
fixed
Priority   Location

     A
Amendment
For Holly, she looks good. Just check as she looks a little squashed, so a bit taller and thinner. Also please check her
feet as they look smaller here.

Holly looks a bit distorted as if she’s been squashed downwards and is a bit wide - see separate doc
Beast Comment   Decision                       Final Status
fixed           Her face still looks squahed
                but I will check with RH

fixed
Priority   Location
           Backgrounds
           to fixing &
           painting and
           Final scene
A          Coffee pot
           (jigsaw)

A          Tea cup &
           saucer
A          Tea cup &
           saucer

A          coffee pot


A          coffee pot -
           final scene

A          Mug


A          jug




    A      Audio
Amendment
These backgrounds are still the background to the windmill and need to be changed to The Elf Tree and in the
episode "Queen Thistle's Teapot, the fixing was done in Ben's bedroom so please change the background to this.
Please keep them simple and uncluttered

Bug - on 3rd time of playing coffee pot fix it game - got to jigsaw and pieces really hard to pick up, then some
pieces appeared on the screen but eventually managed to put all pieces in place but now have dots missing on lid
of coffee pot and now touching the dots nothing happens so game hung. Cannot exit so had to go back to apps
menu pieces break up at start of game - a couple of pieces overlap - can this be amended
When

its not possible to completely decorate the tea cup with the patterns - for example flowers cannot put round
saucer completely and or over the cup particualrly top right. This is true of all the patterns as cannot decorate cup
completely with any of them
dots overlap the edges of the pot which will not be liked by the RH - please fix


shadow does not look right - please check


When glue it back together the audio is so low it is not audible. Also when move onto painting section


gluing - dots missing when played this for 2nd time and also could not hear audio




Voices very low when gluing so I could not hear what was being said
Beast Comment   Decision                               Final status
fixed




fixed


fixed

fixed


fixed           1 dot is overlapping on right
                between spout and lid - please fix

fixed           Shadow does need to be bigger -
                look at PR-09 in the style guide

fixed           Its better but could still be
                improved and the sentence re
                painting is hard to hear
fixed           Dots are now fine but audio is still
                really hard to hear - needs
                improving. The 2nd sentence is
                very hard to hear and this is also
                true for the plate too.

fixed           Still an issue when gluing and
                when Holly talks about painting
Priority   Location
           General

           Beach
           Beach
           Garden
           Ben's bedroom

           All characters
           All characters
           All characters
           All characters
           Score
           Ben's Bedroom

           Ben's Bedroom

           Holly's
           Bedroom
           Beach
           Beach

           Beach
           Beach
           Beach

           Sitting Room
           Courtyard

           Courtyard
           All Characters

           All Characters

           All Characters

           All Characters

           All Characters
    Courtyard
    scene
    Extras

A   5. Garden

A   5. Garden




    7. All
    characters
A
I have just found a bug – I was going through the extras – started with Holly’s bedroom, then went all characters,
courtyard – touching everything to get the sounds and then I went to the garden, then touched the wise old elf and
nothing happened so I touched him several times (4 in total) so he did 4 skips one after the other. Then touched
Holly who did her skip (touched her twice or possibly 3 times, but she has now disappeared off screen leaving 3 stars
in her place. I can still get the VO “This is fun” but no sign of Holly. This needs fixing. Have now exited and when I
select the Garden, Holly is there but she now does several skips and repeats the audio 3 times.

Amendment
Please make sure that all objects & that shadows are 25% opacity - examples in separate doc but please check all
extras.
Make sure shadows are 25% opacity and correct shape for all objects - see separate doc for examples
Ben is incorrect -mouth too big and also his ear is wrong. See separate doc for example
Wise old elf wrong, watering can needs shadow & skipping rope has dark outline which needs removing
edit sound from stereo/radio so that it does not finish mid musical phrase

Height chart included on separate doc to help re scale of characters
background foliage too small - please change - see separate doc
Make sure no leaves etc sticking out behind characters
change colour of sky to blue rather than grey - make sure matches style guide
change score on last two extras so now 300 and 500 rather than 240 and 300
Change SFX for the Fox as it is currently Gaston barking - can you replace with another barking sound

Sound quality of Mrs Elf sounds compressed - please check and improve

When King Thistle says "I declare this a royal emergency" - the sound sounds very compressed - can this be improved

Change 1st starfish sound to a whoop sfx
Change 2nd starfish from a voice to another SFX (but must not have a voice)- could it be slightly different whoop SFX
from Starfish 1
Change shell SFX as it too is a voice - I would suggest whooshing sound (like the wind or sea) or something similar
Change grey boat to coloured boat - suggest you use blues & greens but please refer to style guide
Ben & Holly's shadows are incorrect - check they are 25% opacity and also Ben's shadow looks too big and Holly's
looks too small - please check against the style guide
Shadows are incorrect for sofa, chair & table - please check against BG-16 in style guide
Colour Of Ben's cheek changes when he changes to golf Clubs - there seems to be a dot on his cheek which needs
removing
Ball needs to roll in front of the broom
RH thinks scale is wrong - Gaston too small, Ben & Holly too small and Mr & Mrs Elf too big - please make sure all
characters in this scene are correct according to the height chart in the style guide
Move the sun to the far left so its not behind Mrs Elf's head

Horn goes up to Ben's mouth too late - please make sure its in sync

Mr & Mrs Elf horn are a tiny bit late blowing their horns - please sync correctly

Just noticed that if you touch Holly and then touch Mr & Mrs ELF they blow their horns and no sound is played. Also
if you touch Nanny Plum or King thistle before you touch Mr & Mrs Elf
when Holly has turned Ben into golf clubs, there is a white dot left to the left of the golf clubs - please remove

When player wins 300 poits and sees the extras picture at the end of the game - the old extras picture for All
Characters is displayed and not the new background - please change
 The scale of the blackberries and other foliage is much too small relative to the characters. Again, please refer to
the style guide and stills for scale reference. It’s incredibly important to get this right.
 Skipping rope is in mid air when the scene pauses which looks odd – please change so ends when skipping rope on
the ground


Nanny is far too big against the Queen – please check height chart and also check Ben as he looks smaller than Holly
– again check against height chart. Also Gaston is too big when compared against Ben. Please check all characters
against the height chart.
fixed




Beast Comment   Decision   Final Status
fixed

fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed
fixed

fixed

fixed

fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed

fixed
fixed

fixed

fixed

fixed

fixed
fixed

fixed

        Get RH to check

fixed   When the animation ends the
        skipping rope needs to be on the
        ground - can this be done

fixed   Please check that Gaston is
        correct height against Ben - he
        looks as though he is smaller
        than he should be but I could be
        wrong

				
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