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Best Cartoon or Photo



Overall observations on this category:



As is usual, there were few photo entries in this category, which is a shame. Photos of

members having fun is a great way to create a sense of community and one of the best

advertisements for the union. For those that did enter, the judges looked for interesting

framing and execution—did the photographer do more than just click the shutter? For the

cartoons, while some weight was placed upon artistic skill, the majority of the decisions

considered the story. The more successful cartoons did more than grouse about or take pot

shots at management—they found an interesting or ironic point to make about the

concerns and frustrations of the job, in addition to the importance of union strength and

unity.









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Best Cartoon or Photo



Honorable Mention

Archie Asberry Jr., “CDS shoes”

The Seventy-Niner, Seattle, Washington Branch 79



Though it might work better as a promoting unionism piece, this little drawing shows the

fundamental disconnect between the union and postal management over the use of

Contract Delivery Service with a simple but effective metaphor. Though management feels

that contractors can deliver mail as well as union carriers, it is clear that contractors can’t

fill NALC’s boots. The cartoon, though simple, does an effective job.









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Best Cartoon or Photo



Honorable Mention

Kevin Wrede, “Quibbles’”

The “B” Mike, Portland, Oregon Branch 82



Altering photos digitally with a computer program is an exciting new way to meld the two

parts of this category, photographic realism and cartoon inventiveness. This piece, featuring

a new snack food, skewers management’s seeming tactic of killing with a thousand cuts.

With vinegar and gall, each little bit gets progressively worse. The small details help to sell

the whole, from the little DOIS trademark to the “From the makers of ‘Nettles’!” tag line,

which combine to reveal the level of commitment the artist brought to his work.









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Best Cartoon or Photo



Third Award

John Morrell, “Bigger is ALWAYS better”

Relay, Youngstown, Ohio Branch 385



USPS’s bulky, inefficient scanner is the butt of the joke in this lengthy, Sunday paper-style

cartoon. A carrier is forced to wait for a special tech squad to show up and operate a coffin-

sized device. When asked about the viability of the gadget, the cartoon makes its best

point: about management’s desire to invest in questionable technology to try to stem labor

costs. The drawing style, as with all of Morell’s cartoons, is distinctive and detailed.









4

Best Cartoon or Photo



Second Award—Tie

Cassie Austin, “What’s everybody complaining about?”

Action 33, Massachusetts North Shore Branch 33



Any letter carrier can tell you that it sometimes feels like management expects you to have

more than the customary two arms to handle the job. Austin found a humorous way to

express that frustration in a well drawn cartoon of management’s ideal carrier—an

octopus. The light-hearted approach to the drawing strengthens the irony of what is really

a fair criticism.









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Best Cartoon or Photo



Second Award—Tie

Javier Rodriguez, “Strike! for MDA”

The South Florida Letter Carrier, South Florida Branch 1071



The lone photo winner, this snapshot from an MDA bowlathon shows an NALC member in

triumphant joy, pumping her fists in the air, after she bowled a strike. The photo was taken

at exactly the right moment of excitement, capturing the carrier’s unselfconscious and

infectious smile. Seeing her in this instant, viewers can’t help but be convinced the event

was fun and something not to be missed—a good way to attract more members to the next

MDA event. The framing shows the lane with the dropped pins plus space in front of the

carrier, allowing for the overlay of a title for the photo. And while the judges didn’t agree

with the font choice for the title, it undeniably works as a well-designed whole.









6

Best Cartoon or Photo



First Award

Robbie Cook, “Not as glamorous as it looks”

North Carolina Letter Carrier, North Carolina State Association of Letter Carriers



This excellent cartoon captures the frustration many carriers feel about delivering late into

the evening, even on cold, wintry nights, with a humorous jab from Santa Claus, who’s on

his own delivery route. The drawing is excellently done, with a hint of Thomas Nast’s 19th

century Santa drawings, and the artist captured both the mood of St. Nick and the

grumbling of the carrier.









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Promoting Unionism



Overall observations on this category:



Be careful not to preach at your audience. Find creative ways to urge union members to

take active roles. An emotionally compelling story is more likely to move a reader to act

than an article that merely shouts. Avoid angry statements and endless questions to the

reader—many articles in the category asked more than one “Have you ever noticed?” or

“What would you do?” question. Think of new ways to get your message across.









8

Promoting Unionism



Honorable Mention

Ron Jones, “Shaping Our Future”

Branch 1111 News, Greater East Bay, California Branch 1111



A very good article that drives home the point that just because a new contract is in hand,

union members and the union cannot sit back and rest on their laurels. Jones takes the

piece a step further by describing ongoing projects that will move the union forward.









9

Promoting Unionism



Third Award

Beki Serwach, “Job Security is Job #1”

Frontlines, Utica, Michigan Branch 4374



An excellent reminder of the most important role of the union, ensuring job security for

members, and the obligation of union members to their union. This is a very persuasive

article without being overly preachy. It reads much like a speech, which makes the piece

more powerful and authoritative.









10

Promoting Unionism



Second Award

John H. Curtis, “Mother Jones Goes to Wal-Mart”

The Maine Letter Carrier, Central Maine Merged Branch 391



A nice, well written reminder of how a great union activist put herself and her life on the

line to better the lot of working people, and a call for others to be similarly strong for their

union. The language flows easily, the grammar is impeccable, and all of the words are

carefully chosen. Of course, the final call to action is very fitting and quite original.









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Promoting Unionism



First Award—Tie

Javier Rodriguez, “A Year in the Life of South Florida Letter Carriers”

South Florida Letter Carrier, South Florida Branch 1071



This creative calendar gives a daily boost to union activities, plus its clever use of pictures

and illustrations conveys important information in a not overly heavy-handed manner.

Rodriguez manages to capture the news of the branch’s activities while also offering a

personal view of the events. Even the small details, like the photo captions, are well

written, provide pertinent information, and add to the spirit and tone of the piece. It is easy

to imagine this on the refrigerator or on the wall in every union member’s home.









12

Promoting Unionism



First Award—Tie

Pam Donato, “State Fair Booth Visitors Send Greetings to Overseas Troops”

Branch 9 News, Minneapolis, Minnesota Branch 9



This is an excellent story and photo display of a great union undertaking, a special booth at

the Minnesota State Fair that gave visitors an opportunity to send greetings to Minnesota

military personnel serving overseas. The enjoyable event gave veteran and new volunteers

a chance to bond, to promote their union and to reinforce the importance of letter carriers

to the visiting public. The article opens with the mention of cotton candy and corn dogs,

immediately evoking feelings that come from attending a fair. Filled with witty word

choices like “hubbub” and “mind-bending trivia contest,” Donato sets a fun and upbeat

tone. The story describes a great pro-union activity for all concerned.









13

Best Editorial or Column



Overall observations on this category:



Be very careful to use your forum to impart information, not engage in predictable anti-

management rants or rely on over-used clichés or too-cute characterizations. Also, lose the

obscenity. It does not strengthen your point; rather, it weakens your credibility. And

excessive punctuation marks do not add flair or emotion—a well crafted sentence will

better serve your piece.









14

Best Editorial or Column



Second award

Richard Thayer, “Have We Forgotten or Don’t We Care”

The North Carolina Letter Carrier, North Carolina State Association of Letter Carriers



This is a superbly written piece about the importance of both American history and union

history in everyday life. The description of the author’s pride in his heritage as a letter

carrier and pride in his union is both moving and educational. Thayer makes his points with

clear, well chosen words, without resorting to name-calling, predictable phrases or rants,

which makes his message all the more powerful and effective. He combines personal and

collective experience with facts to make the article both relatable and reliable. The

conclusion to the piece is concise and is sure to resonate with its audience.









15

Best Editorial or Column



First award

Juliette Chen, “Dealing with Bullies”

The Voice of the Golden Gate Letter Carriers, San Francisco, California Branch 214



This article is a stunning story of a woman’s evolution from a person who was picked on

and bullied to that of a strong woman who stands up for herself, and what she lost before

achieving such a transformation. The start of the article seems to lose focus, and it would

have benefited from getting to the point quicker without some of the confusing references

to the mentality of immigrants and Ferdinand the Bull. But the picture of the author in the

“before” stage, when she had nearly floor-length hair, is so compelling that the reader is

pulled in to learn more and finally see the “after” picture, finding out through the story that

she lost all her hair due to stress. It is quickly evident that this is an amazing tale. The point

made in the pull quote, “You must stand up for yourself every day to respond to bullies,”

also encouraged further reading. The story is rich with conflict and concludes perfectly with

a message directed to the reader. What’s more, Chen writes with beautiful style and makes

the right word choices again and again.









16

Best News or Feature Story



Overall observations on this category:



Many of the entries here were neither news stories nor feature stories, but were editorials

or columns instead. Even writers seeking to convey important information on timely topics

were unable to resist the temptation of putting an “I” in their articles, creating an opinion

piece out of what should have been a news story or a feature article.









17

Best News or Feature Story



Second Award

Laurie Miale, “Contract Delivery Routes: Easy Targets”

South Florida Letter Carrier, South Florida Branch 1071



This is a clearly written, straightforward article that makes its point without resorting to

emotion-laden descriptions or anti-management vitriol. Her grammar, usage and clean

style of writing should serve as an example to other writers and editors in the field. Miale

effectively uses transitions that guide the reader through the story, and she also employs a

sidebar that leads into a special section of the article, demonstrating her added

commitment to the topic.









18

Best News or Feature Story



First Award—Tie

Richard Thayer, a collection of personality profiles

North Carolina Letter Carrier, North Carolina State Association of Letter Carriers



Rather than single out a specific entry by Brother Thayer in this category, the judges

recognize him for the collective excellence of his feature writing. He consistently identifies

an important or interesting element in the lives of his subjects and uses that as a hook to

bring readers into the story as he provides insight into the people he is writing about.

Thayer’s writing is excellent, and his style and approach to feature stories is highly

professional and extremely effective. His writing is complemented by the extensive

research he includes in his pieces. His feature writing would hold up well in any regular

news outlet.









19

Best News or Feature Story



First Award—Tie

Robert Rutter, “Five Carriers Brave Flames and Save Lives”

Ranch 1111 News, Greater East Bay, California Branch 1111



This is an honest-to-goodness hard news story that is well written and contains all the

elements of a solid news story—who, when, what, why, where and how. The story of a

letter carrier who used his knowledge of a senior citizens’ apartment building to save lives,

and the contributions of his colleagues from the Piedmont Station in Oakland, located next

door to the burning building, is a great read, well structured and clearly written. And even

better, the heroic action of these letter carriers ensured that the story also had a happy

ending! The only critique from the judges is that the author should be mindful of dashes

and commas. Correct grammar and usage can greatly add to the professionalism of a story.









20

General Excellence: Small Branches (up to 500 members)



Overall comments



The more successful publications provided both an outlet for carriers’ concerns as well as

relevant community news. Visually, publications should strive for consistent treatment of

typefaces in stories and graphic elements. In addition, successful publications limited the

amount of text and graphics per page so that the information was comfortable to read.









21

General Excellence: Small Branches



Third award

The Union Advisor, Greeley, Colorado Branch 324



Clean, systematic structure aids in organization and navigation. Consistent use of typeface

for story headers and body copy aids in readability. Rule lines provide a professional touch.

President’s and vice president’s messages provide important information on the state of

the branch. Review of court cases and current news puts members in touch with issues

relevant to carriers.









22

General Excellence: Small Branches



Second award

The Maine Letter Carrier, Central Maine Merged Branch 391



The pages are easy to navigate and the story information is easy to find because the text on

each page is limited to a reasonable amount. The use of dingbats at the end of each story

adds a whimsical touch. “Ask Dr. Delivery” is a fun way to address the concerns of branch

members.









23

General Excellence: Small Branches



First award

The Informer, Saginaw, Michigan Branch 74



Bright, graphic cover draws attention and entices members to read the publication.

Dynamic organizational elements, such as photos and three-column grid, break up the large

amount of text. Inclusion of fun, family-oriented content and announcement page keeps

constituents and family members interested in what is going on in the branch. Good mix of

branch news and news from related industries, along with features of special interest to

carriers.









24

General Excellence: Large Branches or State Associations









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General Excellence: Large Branches or State Associations



Honorable Mention

The Voice of the Golden Gate Letter Carriers, San Francisco, California Branch 214



Well established structure and masthead on the cover page. Looks clean and organized.

Consistent use of headers and footers helps to orient the reader. Good in-depth review of

issues important to the members.









26

General Excellence: Large Branches or State Associations



Third Award

Mound City Carrier, St. Louis, Missouri Branch 343



Strong masthead. Strong two-column structure aids in organizing information. Good use of

photographs to add visual interest. Stories are informative and touch on a number of issues

important to the members and their families.









27

General Excellence: Large Branches or State Associations



Second Award

South Florida Letter Carrier, South Florida Branch 1071



A full-bleed photo on the cover sets the theme, and consistent visual elements in the main

feature ties them together. The strong page structure aids in readability. Good use of

different typefaces differentiates between information of varying levels of importance. In

the submitted publication, the main feature was a good community interest piece. Other

sections are great sources of useful information for union members.









28

General Excellence: Large Branches or State Associations



First Award

Branch 34’s CLAN, Boston, Massachusetts Branch 34



Publication has an eye-catching masthead. Good use of different typefaces to aid in

navigation and to separate headlines from subheads. Interesting use of cartoons as

opposed to relying on photography alone. Consistent use of template so readers will know

where to find sections each month. Varying the color from issue to issue makes it more

lively. Nice mix of news, features and community updates. Writing had an authoritative

voice and comes across as well informed.









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Congratulations to all our winners!









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