Creative Writing
Portfolio
2006-2007
Forest Park
Crystal J. Galan
10th
Mrs. Dowling
Introduction
Thanks to all viewers friends, foes, and all others.
Through this you will see many sides of me and
somewhat a psychological account of me. If not all
the works I created I am proud of if to choose one it
would have to be First Fright Night; The first short
story I have finished totally, unlike my novels.
Table of Contents
Table of Contents
• Portfolio 1 • Portfolio 2 • Portfolio 3
– Letters on T’s
– A New Journey for – Journal Entry 1
– Scary Dream Excalibur Continued 2, 3, – Journal Entry 2
– New Powers 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, – Journal Entry 3
– Best in Me and 12
– Journal Entry 4
– Death – Compassion
– First Fright Night – Journal Entry 5
– Three Wishes
– First Fright Night – Writing Assignment
– Zoom to the Future
Continued – Poetry
– Are You Superstitious?
– First Fright Night – Additional Work
Continued 2 – Opposites
– Reflections
– First Fright Night – Synonyms
continued 3 – Reflections 2
– Female Girl to
Female Woman
– The Ends of School
Day
– The Imaginary Me
– Reflections
Letters on T’s
I don‟t know why t-shirts are built with letters, well…
actually it‟s usually to display that that person is funny
or smart alike. But where I come in is not the torso but
the legs, people signed my old jeans because the faded
look with signatures on it is tight. For a example one
year I was not able to pay for a yearbook so everyone
that was my friend signed my pants (not while I was
wearing them!) and they were called nice from a lot of
people and now that I can not wear them any more they
provide quite a few memories.
Scary Dream
My dream started with my mother and me in the family van (going where I
did not know) Mom was talking in a language I did not know. I was
enjoying myself as I always do on summer time car trips when I feel
something on my bare foot (I am wearing appropriate under garments and
shorts with my favorite white t-shirt that in cursive pink letters the word
“H-o-t-t-i-e”). It is an at least twelve inch spider crawling up my leg! I
reach for the knob to roll down the window, moving slowly so that the
spider would not notice my movement. My mom was saying don‟t move or
it‟ll bite with poison. I finally got the window down and slowly sat upright,
the spider was facing the radio back toward me. I grabbed it, as I did it spit
out poison at the radio (and only the radio thank goodness) before it could
spit again I threw it out the window. My mom started yelling at me in the
new language and I slouched thinking I was safe.
New Powers
As a wise super-hero once said: “With great power comes great
responsibly.” ~Spider-Man, Spider-Man the movie. To pick a true
power for me I would pick abilities of the real cat-woman not what
Warner Brothers or Marvel tried to create with unnatural cat stories, but
the true version is what I practically live by. As the woman who is a cat
is server to the cat goddess as in ancient Egypt. They could see in the
dark for any thing to be there with enhanced hearing and smell
receptors. They had sharp claws to protect themselves and catch their
prey or climb anywhere they needed to be and were prey to even a
glimpse of fine jewelry or a child in danger. And in conclusion I would
want any of the powers of the REAL CAT-WOMAN.
Best in Me
I don‟t know about best quality in me. I can listen to a person‟s
problems and look at the glass half full but physically I‟ am
incapable to do other things that others can, mentally I‟ am
scatter-brained and my soul well… I like to do the right things
but sometimes my ego gets in the way. I also have an over used
imagination; sure my thoughts might be scattered but most
imaginative.
Death
When I hear this word sadness churns my stomach and now I hear that
a boy named Jacob died and the emptiness of his whereabouts will haunt some
more than others. As for me I can be strong now but for I was not so when one of
the close family was called into the great beyond. For when I was just the age of
six and the age of six is enough to Remember what happened with accuracy and
understand what the police were saying about my grandfather evidently his heart
failed and the car hit a pole and another car, thank goodness no one else was
hurt. But my grandfather also had been sick with high blood pressure and
diabetes. Plus a friend of the family down the street was dieing at the time and
all this shows that death is only sorrow to those left behind, and that we should
no wallow in sadness but all the same I keep a few hundred tears for each person
near me that pass away in the back of my eyes.
First Fright Night
The day was sunny, but Catharine shivered pulling the collar of her denim jacket up. She was a
scrawny girl with long jet-black hair and almost obsidian eyes, she had a skin color of tan that most girls would
die for, and nails that were very short because of her nervousness at school, and was wearing blue jeans, white
and black Nike shoes, with a v-neck white t- shirt and a denim blue jacket. “Well, doesn‟t that look cozy, Cat.”
Heather Itomata (Catharine‟s mother) declared. The pair was looking at an old veteran mansion; it was suppose to
have six bedrooms with balconies, eleven bathrooms, two kitchens, a dining room, a huge foyer a huge flower
garden, and a cemetery. “Heather, don‟t even joke like that.” Catharine went to get the suitcases while a tall,
muscular, dark haired male came up the way from the gates. “Hi, I‟m John from down the street, do you need
some help?” John asked “My name is Catharine, it is nice to meet you John and yes if you‟d like to help you
can.” Catharine replied. As they were walking around to find Catharine‟s mother John inquired to Catharine
“where did you come from?”
“San Antonio, Texas.”
“How old are you?”
“Sixteen and a half, you?”
“Seventeen, this your first move?”
“Yeah, did you move here?”
“No, lived here my life up to now.”
“There you are Cat, I‟ve found your room!” Heather shouted. “Oh yeah, that
really tells me where to put YOUR stuff!” Catharine shouted back. Getting to the spot where Heather was
standing she commented on how Catharine was able to have found a handsome young man to help her.
First Fright Night
continued
After getting all the bags in John told Catharine he would see her at school.
The next day Catharine got up dressed in black jeans, the same shoes, a black v-neck t-shirt, and black
leather jacket. She bumped down the steps, grabbed a piece of toast that just popped out of the toaster, chugged a glass of
milk, kissed her mother on the
cheek, and busted out the front door. At school Catharine had a hard time adjusting. “Alright, settle down and shut up,”
The teacher yelled. “My name is Mr. Jericho and I will be your eleventh grade English teacher, first business is we have
a new student, on the second day of school too, please stand up here and tell us about yourself Itomata, Catharine.” The
teacher ordered “Itomata.” A girl with long blonde hair and blue eyes jeered. Catharine ignored her and Mr. Jericho
pointed at the blonde girl in warning. “Uh…Hi, my name is, as you know Catharine, Cat for short.” Catharine started
nervously. “Meow.” The girl made a jeering cat call everyone was laughing so Catharine could barely be heard “And I
live at the mansion on the hill.” At these words the whole class gasped “You live there?! What are you, some type of a
vampire?!” The girl exclaimed. “Victoria!” Mr. Jericho hollered “Is there anyone who wants to ask a decent question?”
Mr. Jericho requested There were three hands in the air, one of them John‟s. “Yes, Joshua.” Mr. Jericho called. “Is it
scary in there?” Asked Joshua. “Well, no it‟s only scary if you let the horror part of your imagination get away with you.”
Catharine replied. “John?” Mr. Jericho called. “Yeah, uh would it be okay if I came over later?” John looked as if he was
blushing and Catharine could feel her cheeks going red. “Yeah, I guess so.” Catharine responded. “John ask those type of
questions on your own time!” Mr. Jericho shouted. “Victoria.” Mr. Jericho‟s voice sounded suspicious. “It‟s more of a
statement than a question, but this weekend is my birthday party and your all invited to my yacht for the party.” As the
teens shouted in celebration the bell rang. For Catharine the rest of the day was normal.
First Fright Night
continued 2
Five- thirty-two was on the clock when the phone rang, filling the mansion with its eerie tones. Heather
answered it, as Catharine wandered to the extension and listened to her biological mother and father. “Thomas,
you know you‟re not allowed to come near me or her.” The emphasis was on her. Catharine was used to hear
her father want to be a part of the family again, but he already failed that several times that she nor Heather
could stand, to the point they both were kicking him out of the house. “This is not fair and you know it,
Heather.” Thomas whined. After getting off the phone and doing homework Catharine saw Heather by the
phone two hours later, still telling her father to stop hounding them down or else she would press charges.
At eight- thirty that night there was still no sign of John. “He doesn‟t like me Catharine told her
self as she pulled on her long night gown, three hours later she was lying awake staring at the balcony when
she heard a female‟s screams, they were short, loud, and close. A few minutes later there was someone out on
the balcony, rapping at the glass door Catharine lay still, hoping the person would go away; instead it pulled
out a little square that in the shadows looked like a credit card, whatever it was it worked in fooling the lock.
The person was over her now, she could tell even though her eyes were closed in hopes the intruder would go
away, but instead he shook her shoulder whispering. “Catharine? Catharine!? Catharine are you alright?”
“Who on earth are you?” she responded to the shadow, turning on the light on her night table Catharine saw
her intruder was John. “Oh, thank goodness your alright, don‟t you ever scare me like that again.” He gasped.
“Like what?” Catharine inquired. “Like screaming in the middle of the night, I have strong emotions for you
so when I thought it was you I came running.” John retorted. “John, that wasn‟t me.” Catharine calmly
explained. “Then who was it?” John implored “Oh no, Heather!” Catharine shouted. They both ran the dark
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corridor until they reached the Fifteenth door on the left. Catharine opened it and there was her mother was sleeping
soundly. “If it wasn‟t her she would not have heard it to wake up.” Catharine retorted. “How not?” John asked.
“Because you could drop an atom bomb on her and she would wake up in heaven and say „where am I‟.” Catharine
explained. “Then if it wasn‟t you or your mother, I live with my dad and brother so someone else is here.” John
deducted. They walked out to the back porch and were yelling into the dark, eerie, forbidden looking cemetery. “Is
there anyone out there, do you need any help?” After shouting „hello‟ for the thousandth time in the cemetery path
they decided to give up.When they got to the door there was an adult headless man in the doorway. “Stay away!” John
yelled but the huge figure stepped toward him and Catharine, its boots clopped on the wooden porch. “I‟ m warning
you.” John didn‟t sound too convinced of his bravery, but Catharine did not care she just wanted to grab John‟s arm
and run, the only problem with that was her legs felt replaced with lead poles and she could not take her eyes off of
the figure wobbling toward her and John “You asked for it!” In a renouncing bellow John rushed the man, Catharine
giving an exasperated shout “No!” Throttling punches into the headless man‟s abdomen John and Catharine heard;
“No! Okay! Stop before you punch my bosom in!” “Bosom?” Catharine and John mouthed to each other giving
bewildered looks, the figure reached up and pulled down the shirt and a head popped out. “Victoria?!” The couple
shouted in maddened and surprised voices. “Yes, it was me, it was me screaming to wake Catharine up but not you
John, it was me who dressed up to scare Catharine into moving away!” Victoria explained furiously. “But why?”
calmly, Catharine was trying to understand. “Because in school everyone was paying attention to you, they‟re not
suppose to pay attention to a geek like you they‟re suppose to pay attention to sustained popular girls like me!”
Victoria shouted running for the gates. “Y‟ a know that‟s what is different between her and I.” Catharine murmured.
“What‟s that?” John asked. “She would get all worked up about something like that because she‟s a sustained popular
girl, I on the other hand am a mature teenage female and know that I‟ll be popular today and yesterdays news
tomorrow.” Catharine explained. “Don‟t you mean today? And you‟ll never be yesterday‟s news to me, you‟re too
exciting.” John kidded taking her hands in his. “Yeah, let‟s just hope tonight is as exciting as it gets.”
Catharine kidded back. “Don‟t you mean last night?” John teased. “Whatever.” Catharine groaned and
they let their lips flow together
Female Girl to Female Woman
I come all together,
in my stormy world.
Femininity and the joy of being a child
and yet the clock ticks on
as cannon thumps
on life‟s castle walls
and withier old gray
or blinding white
the young soul inside
snarls and rattles
its cage to run
from days that are to be
old and wise.
The Ends of School Day
My head is sore
Filled with bore
And yet the sweet sorrow
of doing this in another tomorrow
but for now I‟d like to rest
and stop being such a pest
to everyone around me.
How could it be
that my mind is blank
and there is no limit to its rank
I could think
through it but maybe it‟s thick as ink.
The Imaginary Me
I believe… I‟ am in a swirling world where everything fiction comes true. My books that I‟ve
read, movies that I‟ve seen come to me here in real life. Please do not think I am crazy I‟ve seen many
doctors and all of them say there is nothing wrong with me except for near sight and obesity. I think it all
started when I was five and I had no friends in or outside of school and then when I thought I was all alone,
there he was Raphael, one of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles off of the hit series. He was almost just like
me but the fact that his anger pushed people away from him and not “other reasons.” And with this in my
head I thought that I could change his attitude toward his three brothers, (Michelangelo, Don, and Leonardo)
his sensei, (Master Splinter) and his human friends (Casey Jones and April O‟Neil). In this sense I found
Raph and many other fiction friends that now and then haunt me, but when I feel cut from the “real world”
social ties I am glad that they are there.
Reflections
This was a lot of fun all the way through, the bumps along the
way were also part of the fun, and the biggest bump was to get over my
supposedly sane pride and write, fix, type, copy, and paste The Imaginary
Me. Sure I feel that some people might take it the wrong way but I am
mostly just like everyone else. “No one can be a person and a heartless at the
same time.”~ Sora, Kingdom hearts 2.
As I said in the beginning I am most proud of First Fright Night
for it being the first of my imaginary creations to be finished for others eyes.
The one I wish not to choose is The Phantom it is not finished or
polished, but I hope to be able to show you by portfolio three.
A New Journey for Excalibur
At the beginning where most stories start, King Arthur‟s reign was at its
peak. Peace was over the kingdom, all the knights were expected at the
round table each day, and the bravest knight had something to especially
look forward to in the not so distant future. He was a man of thirty and with
dark skin and dark brown eyes and brown hair; going by the name of
Travois he was an imposing figure in battles but was always gentle for his
wife, Shiva a seller of flowers that come from a garden that would only
appear for her blood family, she was a beautiful woman, only twenty-five
with royal blue hair and skin pure white with sea green eyes. (She was from
the elemental realm of ice but she had no impulse to be an enemy of the
mortal realm). She also had been with Travois since he was a knight in pre-
training and was having their first-born child. “Travois, congratulations on
getting your first.” Bartholomew made sure that everyone knew that
Travois was becoming a father; of course Bartholomew already had one of
his own. A boy named Eliot after his great-grandfather, he has his mother‟s
sky blue eyes and his father‟s blonde hair, but they both gave him his pale
skin. Only six months old. “Yes, to remind all; good luck with yours.”
Travois laughed full and heartfelt.
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After the conversation about keeping peace, a man that King Arthur obviously
knew stepped in the room; he was definitely younger than Arthur but
looked more serious and shadowed than the king. The king expressed the
orders “Dismissed until sunrise.” Travois had taken great speed to reach
his stone home, where his wife was laying inside. That night, at midnight,
the child was born. Through her childhood she was raised to be brave,
loyal, strong, truthful, and intelligent. Along with these acquired
characteristics she was curious, naive, agile, gentle and beautiful. She
looked as dark as her father in the skin and hair but her eyes were the same
sea green as her mother. The girl, named Corisis was hard to handle as a
child, and full of ideas and excitement.
At the age of five she had gone missing along with Eliot. It was only Travois,
Shiva and Bartholomew looking for the children since they felt King Arthur
and the Knights of the Round Table should not be bothered with a minor
runaway. Corisis and Eliot were found on a hill lying on their backs gazing
at the lights of the sky. “Corisis! What in king Arthur’s name are you
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doing?” bellowed Travois. “Father, I was only showing Eliot the animals in
the skylights.” Corisis reacted with calmness as her mother held her in a
close embrace. “And you?” roared Bartholomew. “It is as the lady says
sir.” The nervousness was embodied in Eliot’s voice. “Take it easy on him
Bartholomew; he was only expanding his mind.” Travois reasoned. “Yes,
but it was with your mischievous little female.” Bartholomew grunted
putting Eliot on his shoulder. “Oh and how do we know that it isn’t my
brilliant girl and your mischievous little male?” Travois shouted after
Bartholomew. Later when Corisis was in bed she requested for Travois to
answer her question, “Father, what does mischievous mean?” “Well it
means in trouble most of the time.” Travois answered. “Is Eliot or I
mischievous?” Corisis inquired. “No, neither of you are.” Travois
responded as he kissed his daughters forehead.
Eight years later…
“Hold still Corisis I can’t hem a dress that is bouncing around.” Shiva
advised. “Sorry, Mom but I can’t believe that Mr. Bartholomew will let
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Eliot take me to the dance that all the knights in training get to attend.” Corisis
swooned. The wooden door flung open and Jensen, one of the Knights of
the Round Table flew through the door. The first words out of Jensen‟s
mouth once he caught his breath were, “He‟s gone!” “Who‟s gone?” Shiva
asked in alarm. “Travois, He was taken by the Black Knight when the
knights assembled.” Jensen explained. “Dad! No! You lie!” Corisis
screamed. “I can not lie to you miss…” Jensen‟s sentence faded into
midair. “Is Corisis here?” Eliot examined the room while standing in the
doorway with a gigantic grin on his face. “Eliot! My father was kidnapped
by the Black Knight; we need to go after him.” Corisis pleaded. “Now that
is a death wish, anyway your father can handle the Black Knight so let‟s
enjoy today.” Eliot reasoned.
At the dance the disguised false king was watching Corisis and Eliot dance
gracefully across the floor. “Son of Bartholomew, come up here with your
lovely young female friend.” Eliot obeyed the phony king. “I ask, what are
your names?” inquired the fake king. “Corisis.” Replied Corisis as she
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curtsied. “Eliot.” Answered Eliot as he took a bow. “Corisis, how would you
like to become my wife?” the king requested.
“Sir, with all due respect, I must refuse that offer. I wish to marry someone
else.” Corisis calmly declined. “I see. Well, I shall make a deal with you: if
you can find your father before the next full blue moon then I will let you
marry this other male but if you don‟t than I get to marry you.” The king
explained. “You mean that you let the Black Knight kidnap my father!”
Corisis screamed in agony. “Well it is not what I let happen it is what you
are going to do about it.” The king mocked while Corisis scowled at him.
The next day Shiva was packing a bag for both of the teenagers while they
were fitting into their fathers‟ suits of armor. When every thing was
prepared the false king came to the house of Travois and bade farewell to
the young knights and told Eliot to keep Corisis out of danger. Down the
path they were headed for the biggest quest of their lives. At the fork Corisis
started walking left, toward the bewitched forest. “Where are you going?”
Eliot asked. “To find my father, are you coming?” Corisis suggested.
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“Are you insane?”
“No, you‟re just an over self respecting male.”
“Then come on, if we have any chance of finding your father it is this way.”
“That way is too easy you only want to go that way because it looks safer
not because there are clues to find my father.”
“And what clues do you have to prove over there?”
Corisis pointed at the ground where recent footprints were left, then lifting
her finger pointed at some broken branches, lastly moving her finger to the
right just a little pointed to some of her father‟s clothes, tattered and
dangling from the branch. “Oh, alright if you really think he‟s this way, then
I have no objection.” Eliot sighed. Long after the dispute day faded into
sunset the couple heard the sound of a cat that seemed to be in terrible pain.
After looking in the brush for it Corisis finally found the source; it was a
little black kitten hidden near a large fig tree. “The poor thing has a cut on
her front left paw; it‟s bleeding profusely.” concerned Corisis whispered.
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The two travelers decided that it would be best to set up a place to sleep. Eliot
was leaning against a tree, (as if he were asleep), but looking up at Corisis
as she attended to the black cat. He felt a warming sensation in his heart,
and fell into a deep slumber.
In the morning Eliot awoke to the kitten meowing happily at Corisis as she
lay there dead to the conscious world, Eliot gently tapped Corisis‟s shoulder
she awoke with a start. “Is Kit alright?” she asked groggily. “Yes, look for
yourself.” Eliot answered while he set off to do his business. Corisis headed
the other way. After a short breakfast the three headed down the path.
“Corisis let the cat walk.” Eliot groaned. “No and her name is Kit.” Corisis
objected. “Ok Kit can walk her self.” Eliot complained. Just then a red
squirrel fell from a tree onto Eliot‟s head. “What the-?” He shouted. “Hey
whoa stop!” the squirrel screamed. “Well I never in all my years…” The
squirrel spouted. “Um, excuse me if I be rude but who are you?” Corisis
asked. “Who what, what ah, you young child I have seen you before, alas it
was when you were just a newborn but you have the same eyes as you‟re
lovely mother, oh forgive me for my rudeness you did ask my name.” The
squirrel realized after ranting.
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“It‟s alright.” Corisis broke the silence. “My name is Tammy and I am a talking
flying red squirrel.” Tammy explained. “O.K. Tammy we are looking for
my father, Travois he was taken by the black knight have you seen him?”
Corisis inquired. “No, but if this is the same case of Black Knight that took
King Arthur and knocked me out cold when I tried to release the king.”
Tammy clarified. “How long ago was this?” Corisis demanded.
“Yesterday.” Tammy answered. “That can‟t be we saw him yesterday and
today.” Eliot made Corisis jump. “Well then the king that you two saw was
his brother, David who was always jealous of our good king.” Tammy shed
some light on the subject that the teenagers were in the dark about. “Did you
see where the Black Knight took King Arthur?” Corisis asked. “No but the
king dropped something I think he wanted to leave a path for whoever came
to look for him.” Tammy reasoned. “Please lead us to it.” Corisis begged.
Tammy reacted by sprinting on all four legs through the trees as if she knew
the path like the back of her paw. “Here it is.” And sure enough there was a
ring lying on the ground. “What‟s that?” Eliot pointed to a little hut not far
from them. “Oh that‟s the tavern where the twins Ferdinand and Gregory
live.” Tammy explained.
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“Let‟s see if those two know anything about the king or my father.” Corisis set
her face and walked toward the hut. Once inside the team saw two bodies on
the floor groaning. “Gregory? Ferdinand?” Corisis inquired. “Yup this is
they.” “I a Ferdinand in hangover.” “Do either of you know where the Black
Knight is?” Corisis demanded. “Yup we know where he put those people but
you got to give us a little something missy.” Gregory giggled. “Now look
here you if you don‟t tell Corisis what she wants to hear I am going to give
you something you will not like at all and if you give us the wrong
information then when we bring you along I am still going to give you
what‟s coming to you!” Eliot had lifted Ferdinand off the floor and his feet.
Eliot had blushed when he saw Corisis out of the corner of his eye; she
looked surprised at Eliot‟s strength. “O. K. I‟ll talk he took them to the tower
in the west from here.” The team stayed the night in the tavern but took turns
making sure the twins didn‟t jump ship.
In the morning the new team set off west for the tower. As they got there
they heard banging and yelling. The team knew that the Black Knight must
be close, so they spread out and sure enough the knight was sleeping against
the tower wall. Tammy had found him and picked up a nearby rock and
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Corisis on the other hand found the door to the tower. When the full team
regrouped; Corisis and Eliot dragged the Black Knight to the door.
“Tammy, get the keys.” Corisis ordered. Tammy pulled the key from the
knight‟s pocket and threw them to Gregory who unlocked the door. Out of
the doorway came an armored King Arthur and an enraged Travois.
“Where is that badgered?” Travois inquired. “Here father.” Corisis
answered him. Travois embraced his daughter. “You did all this, braved the
woods took out the Black Knight and saved the king and I, I am proud of
you.” Travois commended Corisis. “For I did not do it alone I had the help
of my friends; Eliot, Kit, Tammy, Gregory and Ferdinand.” Corisis
admitted apologetically. “Still I have a feeling that if you were not here this
team could not have been, so all the same I am proud of you.” Travois
grinned. “Yes all well and good but I believe we should get to the castle
before David gets his hands on Excalibur.” Eliot pointed out. “No need
have rushed for that I had Excalibur hidden under my mail but, it would be
better to go before he says we are all dead and gone.” King Arthur alleged.
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“There‟s that, but how do we get there it will take two days walking.”
Protested Eliot. “There are horses and a carriage around that tree.” King
Arthur explained. “What about armor for my father?” Corisis questioned.
“No need dear.” Travois responded. “No I will give you this armor.”
Corisis disapproved. “Travois, you take your armor, shield and sword and
let Corisis have the Black Knight‟s.” King Arthur ordered.
After a bumpy ride the team arrived inside the throne room. “Give it up
David there‟s no way out!” Corisis exclaimed. “Oh, so sorry that you found
out my true plan, Corisis now I have to kill you.” David sounded as if he
actually cared about Corisis. They flew into a heated battle as the rest of the
Knights of the Round Table attacked the rest of the team except Jensen and
Bartholomew; they took the hero‟s side. “Why do you attack us so?” King
Arthur inquired. None of the subjects answered. The battle at the throne
between Corisis and David was becoming hard for Corisis when David
knocked the Black Knight‟s sword out of her hand. David then pointed the
sword at Corisis‟s heart. “So sorry love.” David whispered.
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Corisis closed her eyes and waited for the blade, but David swung and Corisis
opened her eyes just in time to see Eliot take the blow for her as he grabbed
the Black Knight‟s sword from the ground, finally Corisis thought that
maybe not all boys (not men) were selfish, pompous, over egotistic,
arrogant things. After Eliot beat David in an intense battle, the knights
stopped attacking. “Why did you attack us so when we are your allies?”
King Arthur questioned and Jensen replied; “Let me explain your highness.
The rest of the round table‟s knights attacked the returning squad because
David had threatened that if we did not obey and protect him that he would
kill our families.” “Then why did Bartholomew and yourself not attack but
defend us?” King Arthur asked. “Bartholomew‟s only family, Eliot, was on
the journey to find you and Travois, sire and I have no family.” Retorted
Jensen. “Is this all true?” demanded King Arthur of the other knights; they
all nodded.
A New Journey for Excalibur continued 12
In years time David was to work for the inn in the village, taking care of the horses.
Ferdinand and Gregory had become sober and were teaching children that being
drunk does not at all help their problems in any way. In another teaching place, a
park to be exact, Tammy would give flying lessons to anyone that showed up.
Jensen was awarded a medal for having to stand up to his friends and he still lives
alone but knows that he has plenty of people that will gladly give him company.
Bartholomew and his son were together and they kept contact, as did Travois and
Shiva with their daughter. On his throne again King Arthur was an even better king
from his well rounding journey. As for our heroine, Corisis and her male sidekick,
Eliot, they have become closer than two people can get, not meaning marriage
(yet), but they became official members of the round table but Corisis has to have
Kit with her at all times and Eliot had made a house for Corisis and himself. I
know we‟re missing Merlin but not to worry soon after Corisis and Eliot saved the
kingdom from David Merlin predicted that that was not the last time that the
couple would face danger, that there was more to be done in the future. All that
Eliot and Corisis had to say was “Bring it on.”
The End (Or is it?)
Compassion
Compassion is a thing no one can buy,
For compassion can not be seen by the eye
But it is felt within another sense
That is a tangle of body mind and soul
That causes one to become whole
And it is this that you cannot see
about me
For I have compassion for you
I cannot deny it’s true
I love you
Pooh
Three wishes
If I had only three wishes and no freebies… I would wish
my family was financially secure and living where they
would want to. Second I would wish to go to Hogwarts (a
more fun school than ones I’ve been to before) and all
the excitement of even the classes would keep me busy.
Last my final wish would be to rid the world of hatred,
evil and injustices so that maybe things could be the way
they were when I was five.
Zoom to the Future
Dear future Crystal Joy Galan
Hey what’s up. You know I had to do that, but really what happened to
you? Do you still have the cool glasses your mom got for you? I hope
you do otherwise your mom is gonna have your throat (not literally).
Did Jesse get more mature? Have you lost a duel? I hope Jesse grows
up and doesn’t mess with you till you’re yelling, and I hope you don’t
lose any duel you’re in. and I still have so many questions for you like
do you get over that nightmare and trying to change your last name, I
hope so. But most of all I hope this letter finds you, your family and
friends well and you more in adulthood than I, but that’s all I want to
say for now.
T. T. F. N.
Crystal Joy Aurora Borealis
Are You Superstitious?
I have had the opportunity to walk under ladders, (accidentally) break mirrors, cross
black, and a verity of other colors, cat’s path, live through Friday the thirteenth, and many
other “unlucky things” but these things did not cause damage to me or anyone I know
and or love. On the other hand it could be a regular day and something bad can happen.
Let me give you three examples. One, it was spring and I was four or five and I tried to
climb the fence to my friend Chuck Quinn’s house but before I got all the way over I was
attacked by wasps. (How was I suppose to know they built a nest in the fence?) I ran and
with the help of Grandma and insect repellant we got the wasps to go back into their nest,
later Grandma disposed of them with Raid, and as for me Chuck helped me giggle away
the pain of the stings. Second was when I was twelve and a boy broke my heart then had
nerve to ask me if he could date me again, luckily Chuck was at the same middle school
as me and he kept telling me that the other boy didn’t deserve me. Last when I was
seventeen I was playing paintball shooting with my friends, and I was in shorts while one
of my friends was very well hidden and shot me when my leg was less than an inch from
the back of my leg. And all the way home and till this day Chuck says he’s sorry and he’s
not the one who shot me! In conclusion I don’t believe in bad luck.
Opposites
Burning in the sky
there is but one
Our glorious shining
sun
And after sunset soon
The sun’s reflection,
the moon.
Synonyms
FIRE
Heat, strength, anger, burning light
Keeps all safe at night
Reflections 2
This is another leap for me and my writing and again I
would like to thank everyone that took the time to
fill my head with ideas and or help me get my ideas
onto the pieces of paper.
If you asked me my favorite I could not choose they
are all my creation so they are all good. Oh, and
about the phantom, I’ am getting there if I don’t
have it by next portfolio then you can nag me.