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My Flowing Self

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									                                    My Flowing Self
        Frankly , it’s really tough and contradictory to analyse and dissect your
own characters . you can always find some personalities you dislike or even hate
hide in your heart . for my part ,I define my self as a word “flowing”.
         What are the reasons that makes it a sensible introduction ? for one
thing , I always like my life flowing above others’ wiling . do as my own wish , so
you won’t be regrettable. laugh all the time , so you fire your outer radiance .
obey your own objective , so your horizon won’t be foggy. construct your own
mental kingdom ,so you won’t lose your faith for your life . in a word , be my real
self is my flowing life . for another ,my attitude often flow when I make my
decision ,maybe I can call it hesitation . flow form diligence to laziness . flow
from the self-trust to the lack of courage . flow from the bravery to the coward .
        Virtually , I like to the sense of flowing , and that’s my real me .
everyone has his own attitude towards life, and that’s your real self . what’s
yours ?

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                                    The Flowing Self
          Frankly, it’s really tough and contradictory to analyse and dissect your own characters.
You can always find some personalities you dislike or even hate to hide them in your heart. For
my part, I define myself as a word “flowing”.
          What are the factors that make it a sensible introduction? For one thing, I always like
my life flowing above others’ wiling. I do as my own wish, so I won’t be regrettable. I laugh all
the time, so I fire my outer radiance. I obey my own objectives, so my horizon won’t be foggy. I
construct my own mental kingdom, so I won’t lose my faith of life. In a word, being my real self
is my flowing life. For another, my attitude often flows when I make my decision. Maybe I can
call it hesitation. Furthermore, I always change from one point to another extreme: flowing from
diligence to laziness, from self-trust to the lack of courage, from the brave to the coward.
         Virtually, I like the sense of flowing, and that’s the real me. Everyone has his own attitude
towards life, and that’s your real self. what’s yours ?



Teacher’s words: Your idea is very creative. According to your introduction, readers can know
who you are. However, you’d better pay attention to several points. First, you should know how to
use punctuation correctly. In other words, you should know how to end a sentence. Second, write
complete sentences. A sentence should contain subject and predicate. Third, it’s an article to
introduce yourself, so you’d better use “I”, “my”, not “you”, or “your”. Fourth, different idea
should be explained respectively.
Read my revising version carefully, you can find your weak point and improve it.

								
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